After reading the lyrics through without hearing the song one question pop up - do you feel sorry for the girl or yourself, that is a little hard for me to figure out.

Just my 5 cents - you need to decide who's feelings as a listener I should pay attention to, and I sit with mixed emotions.

As others' has pointed out - it would be nice to listen to a simple version of the song in order to get in the right mood for the lyrics.

I know that writing lyrics can be very painful - so keep up the good work, and please reach out if you found the above helpful.

Cheers
Peter


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