Nice work, and very pleasant listen.
I noticed that your sung lyric had some changes vs. what you posted, and I think you made some real good adjustments.
The only change I'd make is your choice of the word "ontar-i-OH", positioned at the end of the line sounds unnatural.
If you're looking for a bit of a change-up in the drum, you might consider adding something like a tambourine to the basic drums at certain points.
Thanks for posting it!