I like this..... reminded me of the tune I wrote a number of years back.... Similar story, but faked a move up north but ended up in Mexico after a bank robbery by a local girl and an unknown male accomplice.


I like this song alot.... cool stuff. Only nit I might not have a long instrumental break between the first and second verse.


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