Hello Dan,

Your song has a lovely melody and is sung very good (although your pronouncation of 'Savior' can be improved; I couldn't hear what you sang).
But I liked how the song was build up. Especially how you performed when that very nice transposing came in. I think it was at 1/3 before the end of the song.
I am not at all religious, but that doesn't mean I can't like beutiful songs and vocals. And that's what is going on here!
That update is very well done, but I haven't heard the original song...

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130