Well constructed song. Although there were quite a few components, nothing seemed superfluous and everything meshed beautifully.

On the fourth line of your chorus you have the word "bound" (which is variously a verb or adjective).
I think you might have meant to use the noun "bond" (which is more like how it sounds in the song).

Great job, Floyd. Looking forward to your next.


My music may not set the world on fire but if it causes a glow in just one person's heart, it has all been worthwhile smile