Tano,
Although I'm just a songwriter hobbyist, in the spirit of collaboration, here's my two cents.
I liked your new song too, but like Noel I think it could be shorter. It's hard to hold the listeners ear much past 4:30 unless you have new elements being introduced. I think Noel had some great tips (which I'll write down in my notebook).
You asked for some input on the arrangement, how about an alto or tenor sax to fill in between the lyrics? Some Vibes or marimba fills might be interesting too.
Nice song with a sweet sensitive sentiment. Thanks for sharing.

SpaceDog