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Here is a song i posted as a scratch version over a year ago. I finally got around to re-recording the vocal track, and giving it a good mix down. https://soundcloud.com/robhelms57/coming-home-updated-mix Give 'er a good old fashioned listen if you have the time, and all comments are welcome.
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Hi Rob,
I can't remember having heard this before. I must've missed the scratch track you originally posted. This is excellent. What a great melody to support brilliant lyrics. Add to this, your singing sounds great!
Kudos to you all round!
All the best,
Noel
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Yeah, I liked it too. But there is room for improvement, like an acoustic guitar track or electric acoustic rhythm guitar track, of some sort, or both. A soft acoustic track would almost seem essential to this song. Good song, great vocals.
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Thanks Noel, nice words
PD you might have nailed, a nice soft acoustics maybe 12string. I'll do some experimenting.
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Rob,
Nice. I think PD is right... add an acoustic strum to this.. and you'd be done.. the vocals are really well recorded.
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+1 on adding the guitar. Really nice vocal. What a loving thing to write for your daughter.
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Beautiful work! Thanks for sharing! My Tunes
My TunesPsalm 57:7 My heart, O God, is steadfast, my heart is steadfast; I will sing and make music.
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updated mix with acoustic guitar track
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Hi Rob,
Very, very nice. That was a great suggestion of Pariahdise's! I thoroughly enjoyed the second version.
Can I suggest you change the link in the original post as it no longer works. I had to go to your site and then find the song (not that it was hard but it might add a layer of difficulty for some people who are not overly familiar with Soundcloud).
All the best,
Noel
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Got it fixed. Thanks Noel
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Very pretty song Rob. For your daughter? She's lucky to have a father who immortalizes her in song.
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Thanks Bob, I value your input.
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Very pretty song Rob. For your daughter? She's lucky to have a father who immortalizes her in song.
Exactly.
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Thanks "G" I really appreciate your listen.
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The prodigal daughter, eh!
I think we've all had one of those!
A really lovely song and I hope that she has heard it and knows how you feel.
Didnt hear "Mark One" version but there is a balance to this one that is excellent.
cheers
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Thanks sixer, It was a labor of love. Hopefully one day she will fully get it.
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Hi, Rob !
I liked the tune very much
and especially your duet parts!
Cheers
Dani
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Thanks Noel, nice words
PD you might have nailed, a nice soft acoustics maybe 12string. I'll do some experimenting.
+1 I am thinking maybe the new realtrack (I am away from my BIAB computer now) I think it is called "easy listening acoustic. It should mold this already good track into a more solid backing.
I love the reprise, as this is what I was thinking throughout the song that this would be a great welcome home for any soldier who had been to war . . . and viola! That's what it was. This means your intent had me from the git go.
Later,
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