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olemon #252952 06/06/14 11:20 PM
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Very well done, Great vocal and lyrics thanks for sharing!


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Hi Scott,

Like the combination of the harmonica and the Resonator guitar.
A nice and relaxed song.


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Originally Posted By: RichMac
Good fun. Like the vocal and lyrics. A bit of a roger Miller sound there. Cheers.


Yep, just what we were thinking! That says it all for us. nice, indeed!!!

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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Scott,

A VERY solid write! Interesting and original...

Good production. Nice balance to everything (nice drums!).
Nice vocal...

Get those solos right... once again, this is too good to have anything "not quite what it should be"....

Very enjoyable.

floyd


Thanks Floyd. Yes, I spent a little more time on the drums now that I understand the style variations and so on:)

Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
I'm with fj on this....the tune is well worth playing around some more with the solos. The lyric is way way too good not to. And the mix is spot on. Hey, that's the best use of an RT harp that I've heard yet!


It's really an experiential thang regarding mixing sw and ev RT's. I frequently put a swing bass on our bluegrass compositions and although the BG tracks are ev it works fine. For years I'd play a swingish walking bass with our BG band and get away with it -- or at least I think I did smile I've mixed a few sw and ev RTs other than just BG and, in general, I can feel them fighting each other or at best gently tugging -- which may work.


So hard to know if the RT's embellishments and the riffs are too much or not enough. Glad the harmonica worked. On the ev and the sw RT's, yep, gotcha'.

Originally Posted By: tommyad
Scott, Some great lines in this one. I may be in the minority here but I didn't like the way the verses were left hanging on the word quite. The rest of the write is very solid. The drums are sounding good. The vocal is good. The mix is good, but as others have said the solos need work. You are most definitely heading in the right direction. Keep writing! Tom


Thanks Tom. Actually, I'm somewhat in the minority too. I'm asking a lot from the listener to wait around till the end of the chorus to find out what the heck that 'Quite' meant. I took a chance there, I know....



Ya'll know I value your critiques and appreciate the listens. I hear what you're saying.

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Originally Posted By: RichMac
Good fun. Like the vocal and lyrics. A bit of a roger Miller sound there. Cheers.


Thank you sir!

Originally Posted By: Kemmrich
real nice song and excellent performance. Good back story and lyrics, too. I am not sure if I would have noticed the solo stuff if others hadn't mentioned it above, but I guess they are right (ha, ha). Do the solos yourself if you can (or get someone else to do it).

Mighty fine line listen. You know I gotta like it since it has the word "chemistry" in there!


Glad you enjoyed the song and the lyrics.

Originally Posted By: Sonny Ray
Love the lilting bounce of this tune and the Tom T. Hall-like lyrics. Nice clean-sounding arrangement, and a perfect vocal.
"Talk them apples right into the pie" indeed! That's a video I'd like to see.
Thanks for posting this one.


Thanks for that Sonny. The song came to me as an old timey country tune, but I never would have guessed Roger Miller or Tom T. Hall:)

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Nice tribute to the one that sticks by us through thick and thin.

"I could sing about those emerald eyes and ruby lips
Sexy talk sexy walk the way she swings those hips."


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Originally Posted By: Sundance
Scott,

Some cool lines in there, good melody and strong vocal. I also like the arrangement. The solo probably could fit tighter.

I like your song a lot.

Josie


Thanks for listening Josie:) I really wanted some driving, twangy Nashville guitar to help nudge this song into the present. I'll have to give it another go.

Originally Posted By: MarioD
Scott, I agree with all that's been said. All I can add is that I really like your vocal and lyrics on this one. Super job on that.


Thanks so much for those kind words.

Originally Posted By: PgFantastic
Very well done, Great vocal and lyrics thanks for sharing!


Appreciate that:)

Originally Posted By: R & AM
Hi Scott,

Like the combination of the harmonica and the Resonator guitar.
A nice and relaxed song.


Thanks. I did too. The RT's are amazing! Love this music software!!

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Originally Posted By: RichMac
Good fun. Like the vocal and lyrics. A bit of a roger Miller sound there. Cheers.


Yep, just what we were thinking! That says it all for us. nice, indeed!!!

Alan & Di


Thank you both so much. You're in our thoughts and prayers.

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