|
Log in to post
|
Print Thread |
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Feb 2015
Posts: 325
Journeyman
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Feb 2015
Posts: 325 |
All tracks are BIB except the arpeggio guitars. https://soundcloud.com/willrockwell/just-friends5You are charged with the kind of motivation that always takes my breath away The day we met I sent you running through my heart Switching on the lights and turning darkness into day Locked in breathless emotion Swinging to the sound of your voice So anxious to know and desperate to show I'm not just one of the boys But I know as quickly as it begins the risk is coming it's hard to pretend Keep it to yourself Don't let on we're just friends I was captured by the same anticipation that always seems to follow you Hanging on to every word that passed your lips Enchanted by the style in every little thing you do It's just an illusion a dream that I made for you I'll keep it inside, hang on to my pride for dreams have a way of coming true And I know I can hear it coming and once it's said it's hard to pretend I don't want to hear it You don't have to share it Keep it to yourself Don't tell me we're just Friends don't give up their secrets Friends don't kiss in tha moonlight Friends don't put their thoughts away and hold onto each other in the middle of the night I don't want to hear it, I don't want to know Please don't say it, don't tell me we're just I don't want to hear it , I don't want to know Please don't say it, don't tell me we're just friends not just friends I don't want to be just friends No, not just friends
ProTools 12, Faderport 8, Melodyne, JBL monitors, Novation UltraNova, Yamaha MX49, Stratocaster, Telecaster, Rickenbacker 12, Ovation 12, Vox VT20X amp
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 3,311
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 3,311 |
Hey Will,
I REALLY liked this one.
The backing was very busy and detailed, but I could still hear everything and the way it cruised along was great.
Loved the story, particularly the lines -
"Friends don't give up their secrets
Friends don't kiss in tha moonlight
Friends don't put their thoughts away
and hold onto each other in the middle of the night"
That was inspired.
I see you've not been with us long, so let me say welcome to the forum and I look forward to more of your stuff.
ROG.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 2,646
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 2,646 |
I second ROG's lyric choice, well written performed and mixed thanks for sharing!
My TunesPsalm 57:7 My heart, O God, is steadfast, my heart is steadfast; I will sing and make music.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jan 2012
Posts: 3,615
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Jan 2012
Posts: 3,615 |
Like the riff particularly.
Good write.
Rob
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Apr 2013
Posts: 8,115
Veteran
|
Veteran
Joined: Apr 2013
Posts: 8,115 |
There's a lot to like about this one. Very well written and performed.
Enjoyed it.
Charlie
BIAB Ultra Pak+ 2024:RB 2024, Latest builds: Dell Optiplex 7040 Desktop; Windows-10-64 bit, Intel Core i7-6700 3.4GHz CPU and 16 GB Ram Memory.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 6,923
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 6,923 |
I really like this!! Very well written and great vibe.
he day we met I sent you running through my heart
Switching on the lights and turning darkness into day
Great lyric. I would change the word "sent" to "felt" -just an opinion
Really enjoyed this! Take care. Greg
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Feb 2015
Posts: 325
Journeyman
|
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Feb 2015
Posts: 325 |
I agree with you about the word change
ProTools 12, Faderport 8, Melodyne, JBL monitors, Novation UltraNova, Yamaha MX49, Stratocaster, Telecaster, Rickenbacker 12, Ovation 12, Vox VT20X amp
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2014
Posts: 4,048
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: May 2014
Posts: 4,048 |
Hi Will,
A nice and catchy song!
Welcome to the forum.
Rob and Anne-Marie
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Feb 2015
Posts: 325
Journeyman
|
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Feb 2015
Posts: 325 |
Greg, You were spot on with your suggestion of changing "sent" to "felt". I did a new vocal and remixed. Here's the result. You'll be getting a tiny royalty check. https://soundcloud.com/willrockwell/just-friends
ProTools 12, Faderport 8, Melodyne, JBL monitors, Novation UltraNova, Yamaha MX49, Stratocaster, Telecaster, Rickenbacker 12, Ovation 12, Vox VT20X amp
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 6,773
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 6,773 |
Will,
Excellent write - liked everything about it.
Bob
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.
ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 French for Windows is Here!
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 apporte plus de 50 fonctions nouvelles ainsi qu'une importante de contenus nouveaux à savoir : 222 RealTracks, des RealStyles nouveaux, des SuperTracks MIDI, des Etudes d'Instruments, des Prestations d'Artistes, des "Morceaux avec Choeurs", un Set 3 de Tracks Jouables, un Set 2 de RealDrums Jouables, deux nouveaux Sets de "RealDrums Stems", des Styles XPro PAK 6, des Xtra Styles PAK 17 et bien plus encore!
Tous Packages | Nouvelles Fonctionnalités
Video: Making a Song with Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V
Take your Band-in-a-Box® project to a whole new level when you incorporate ChatGPT and Synth V to add lyrics and vocals to your song!
We wanted to demonstrate how this is done with our video, where we show you how to go from nothing to a finished "radio ready" modern pop song by combining the features of Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V!
Listen to the finished song, so you get a listen to the finished product: https://demos.pgmusic.com/misc/behindthefame.m4a
If you like it, watch the video. Either way, let's hear your comments!
Henry Clarke: Revolutionize Your Band-in-Box® Tracks with Regenerating Function
User Video: Next-Level AI Music Editing with ACE Studio and Band-in-a-Box®
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 German for Windows is Here!
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 für Windows Deutsch ist verfügbar!
Wir waren fleißig und haben über 50 neue Funktionen und eine erstaunliche Sammlung neuer Inhalte hinzugefügt, darunter 222 RealTracks, neue RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, "Songs with Vocals" Artist Performance Sets, abspielbare RealTracks Set 3, abspielbare RealDrums Set 2, zwei neue Sets von "RealDrums Stems", XPro Styles PAK 6, Xtra Styles PAK 17 und mehr!
Paket | Was ist Neu
Update Your PowerTracks Pro Audio 2024 Today!
The Newest RealBand 2024 Update is Here!
The newest RealBand 2024 Build 5 update is now available!
Download and install this to your RealBand 2024 for updated print options, streamlined loading and saving of .SGU & MGU (BB) files, and to add a number of program adjustments that address user-reported bugs and concerns.
This free update is available to all RealBand 2024 users. To learn more about this update and download it, head to www.pgmusic.com/support.realband.htm#20245
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Forums66
Topics81,880
Posts738,404
Members38,610
| |
Most Online2,537
Jan 19th, 2020
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Dansk
Deutsch - Windows
Español
Français - Windows
Italiano - Windows
Nederlands
Polski
Português
Svenskt
русский
Japanese
Simplified Chinese
Traditional Chinese
Korean