I still wonder what an old man thinks! As a youngster, folks the age I am now seemed to be O L D.
Mentally, I still think I'm thirty. It's not until the heavy lifting that I realize I got off at the wrong train stop.
Good song. The lyrics are very well written and you have a fitting arrangement in the music.
Your vocal phrasing at the very beginning of the line, "When the church bell tolls..." I thought you may be giving us a surprise and the verse was going to be conversational rather than singing. Didn't happen, but might have fit in nice.
Enjoyed this -- even with the line or two that were too close to dodge.