Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Robert,

I like it! A lot.

The band is well done. Rockin'. And a great compliment to your lyric, I think. Gave me a sense of early Genesis. Poetic lyric to a rock musicscape. Very cool.

The vocal sounds great. For this style, I think it should be "in the mix" a little more (less "up front"). Perhaps down 1.5 dB (but that is objective, of course).

This is terrific! I hope you will do more like this...

fj


I agree. I hear a little Genesis, little Bryds, little Moody Blues, and A LOT of things I like. The arrangement is busy but not in a bad way. It provides a great texture for the song. Very cool write. Probably my fave of yours, though you have a lot of good ones! Take care. Greg