Very nice! Other than "vapor trail" and "fly" and the fine write has somewhat of a Victorian feel.

Your vocal is very much showcased in this tune and that is good...very good. As fj mentioned a wee bit more 'verb on it would spread the soundstage love smile

We agree with Charlie regarding the early country rock feel. Back to the formative years of the sub-genre... a la Stone Poneys, etc.

One to be pleased with for sure!!

J&B