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2 Week Old Biskit She had a 2 week old biscuit, on the floor of her car A bent Pepsi can, an old scratch off card Paint on the seat covers, everthang had it's scar. Half eaten breakfast, and a magical jar. As I rolled one we laughed, and for a while we would talk About our old friends ,that made their last walk We talked of the past, and a future for a while And I Drove away a thinkin, it's sure nice to smile She carries my heart in her pocket Use to be here on my sleeve Pretty sure that it's still a beatin Getting hard for me to breathe She got a heart of gold, just sayin Little bit in her hair, you can see She's pushing my soul towards heaven where together we'll always be. We're both getting older, there's no guaranty We'll see one another, or maybe eternity. I cried as I wrote, like cut with a knife I'll remember that day, for the rest of my life. She carries my heart in her pocket Use to be here on my sleeve Pretty sure that it's still a beatin Getting hard for me to breathe She got a heart of gold, just sayin Little bit in her hair, you can see She's pushing my soul towards heaven where together we'll always be. She had a 2 week old biscuit, on the floor of her car
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Love the song Tommy and the lyrics hit home. Would like to hear it straight with clear unprocessed voice. Cheers.
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Thanks RichMac! I was trying some new mixin and verberatin!
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Awesome tune. Very cool lyric and vocal. Love the steele
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HI Tommy,
A little different but most enjoyable! This might sound odd, but to us this might be characterized as a country version of Leon Redbone. Great listen. Love the originality and delivery of the song. Kudos!
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Thank You so much ALan & Di!
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Great stuff, Tom! Love the lyrics. The vocal delivery is absolutely perfect -- really carries the story along well.
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Wow, Tommy! This is a side of you we don't always see! You are not only the master of humorous songs and blazing blues solos, you are also the man when it comes to classic country!
I like the imagery and the background story! And of course, those pedal steel licks are a good fit for the song too!
if we awarded biskits as quality achievements, this would get 10 out of 10 possible biskits!
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Thank You So Much Will B, wouldn't be much of a song without BIAB and just me bellerin!
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These Biskits go to 11!!!!!! lol Thanks Pat for your kind comment! I think after 38 years of knowing that girl, Ima startin ta like her a little! I done played a bunch of Country hare in Texas, been a pickin 52 years next month on my burfdae! That's the Les Paul antiversary, if anybody is a lookin fer a surprize .gif !
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Tommy Good stuff - nice crooning.
Peter
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Thank You So Much PeterF!
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Hey, Cuz! That's some pretty good country lyrics there! Like Pat said, really good imagery.
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Thanks Cuz! Most of it is factual, especially the description of her car. Always had a crush on her!
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Thank You So Much for your kind comment Marty!
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I love this!!!! There is a sincerity in there that is so powerful buried beneath the wonderful humorous images. And, you can sing country man!! Glad to see you around here more. Your talent and humor are both limitless!!!! Take care. Greg
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Thanks Greg! Being from Texas, I had to sing Country or be banished to (GROAN) Arkansas! lol
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Said Biskit! Yep it was a True Story!
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