Robert,

This is an outstanding listen.

I found it very emotive in music, words and performance. So many memories came flooding back into my mind as I tagged along on the music's journey.

I loved these lines and the way you used them to bookend the lyrics.

  • floor is tilting
    roof is rising
    windows are watching

The first two lines set up the third line beautifully. I was hooked after these.

Then, in the chorus when you say...

  • you can`t get lost can`t get lost
    if you come from nowhere

... you made me think about existentialism. Wow!

But the above are just some of the incredibly inventive lyrics you've written. These words are a literary feast. I'll think I'll go and have a drink of abracadabra now!

This is a sensational creation!

All the best,
Noel


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