Agreed. A lot of power in all aspects, progression, vocals, and instruments/arrangements. BIG stuff.

Can I make one comment? I think the note under "-ing" (as in Grace never endING) is too long. That could be rephrased somehow without changing the lyric at all...just rephrasing that line. It's not your vocalist. It's just that long, unchanging "eeee" sound doesn't feel natural. If I'm counting right, it's at least a whole note. Shorten to a half-note with a couple of quarter-note hits following? Just a thought.

Much enjoyed.

Last edited by Tangmo; 10/12/18 11:19 AM.
BIAB 2021 Audiophile. Windows 10 64bit. Songwriter, lyricist, composer(?) loving all styles. Some pre-BIAB music from Farfetched Tangmo Band's first CD. https://alonetone.com/tangmo/playlists/close-to-the-ground