Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
That was awesome Robert! I admire so much your lyrical ability...wish I had the ability to weave words like you! A great little melody to boot also! Thanks, Torrey!


Thank you Torrey!

Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
What a tune! I love the lyricism on this one. It really paints a pictures, and works beautiful with the chosen instrumentation. It makes it really vivid and powerful, and I connected with it immediately.

Thanks for sharing smile


Deryk,
Its good to know the story came through- thanks for your comments.

Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
We were perusing the forum and came back to this.

So even though we already commented we just wanted
to say that we feel you should seriously consider a
book of poetry.

J&B


J&B,
I always think I`m too lazy a writer to be a poet..songwriting is way more forgiving!
Thanks for having another visit with this.



Originally Posted By: Noel96
Hi Robert,

Listening to these lyrics is like wandering around the shelves of a children's library. The imagery is very vivid. As usual, you've painted some excellent word pictures for the listener.

Another fine song for your collection!

All the best,
Noel


Hi Noel,
A nice description and a positive review: thank you!

Originally Posted By: Tangmo
Finding truth in fiction. Yep.

Loved the americana band and the harmonica fills. Very easy to sink into this. Your lyrics are ever engaging and the melody of the title line is very strong and still singing in my head. Really nice one, Robert..


Tangmo,
I`m glad you enjoyed this... and can relate to that punch line!


Robert