That was a cool trip back to the roaring days of yesteryear.

My mom would have loved that song.

The write was good. Your vocals fit nicely and your voice tone is spot on. A few polsives if you are listening for them but nothing that ruins the mix. A pop filter will solve that.

All said.... Great job!

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