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She Took Me For A RIde A coming of age story. Leon Lyric & Vocals I played some guitar and sang. The Band: RealTracks in style: ~683:Bass, Electric, PopHalfNotesPush Ev 120 RealTracks in song: 380:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Syncopated Sugar Ev 102 RealTracks in style: 1526:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopPowerPushA-B Ev 120 RealTracks in song: 3287:Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Fingerpicking CelticWaltz Ev 100 RealTracks in song: 1752:Accordion, Rhythm Pop8ths Ev 110 RealTracks in song: 3537:Vocals, Background GospelCoolLow2 Sw16 075 RealDrums [in style:RockSoftEven8^3-a:Blastix, HiHat , b:Snare Ride ******************* She Took Me For A Ride She took me for a ride, in her little blue sports car I didn’t know where we were going Were we friends, or was it something more? I felt I had no way of knowing I was young, so very young She seemed worldly and experienced Women were a puzzle, I hadn’t solved Illusive and mysterious My heart was open, not yet broken My clay was ready for the shaping I longed to fly away, rise above the fray Eager not to keep the future waiting She took me for a ride, she opened up my eyes Showed me a different way to be She opened up my eyes, stripped away the veil Showed me a different way to see Glory be Glory be Glory be She took me by surprise, forever changing She always kept me on my toes She took me to the edge, and brought me back again I traced her every ebb and flow My heart was open, not yet broken My clay was ready for the shaping I longed to fly away, rise above the fray Eager not to keep the future waiting She took me at my word, took me at her leisure She saw all the way through me She read me like a novel, always had my measure With her l could be the real me Glory be Glory be Glory be
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Lovely & heartfelt song. Nice hooks. Enjoyed the singing and mix.
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Peter and Leon,
I really like the production on this, the way it builds.
Nice writing, Leon, lots of good lines. Favorite:
"My heart was open, not yet broken
My clay was ready for the shaping"
Good vocals and harmonies, nice guitar fills and outro solo.
Quite long at almost six minutes, but it didn't seem long.
Good one guys, enjoyed!
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String rhythm guitar! Wonderfully written song. Magical how you build it. "Eager not to keep the future waiting". Man, this song really grows to the glory. Perfect choice of instruments. Well mixed, and super vocals.
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Leon & Peter...
"My heart was open, not yet broken
My clay was ready for the shaping
I longed to fly away, rise above the fray
Eager not to keep the future waiting"
Nice.
Cool production. The BIAB vocals are a nice addition. And good use of the accordion. Nice guitar. Well sung. Well mixed.
I enjoyed all 6 minutes of it!
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Leon & Peter, Well sung both the lead and harmony. Nice guitar solos. I stayed engaged through the entire song. Good mix and great listen, Tom
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Lovely & heartfelt song. Nice hooks. Enjoyed the singing and mix. Thanks much appreciated. Peter
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Great song Peter! You really out did yourself on those lyrics. Fine writing.
I really enjoyed this. Happy Holidays.
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Peter and Leon,
I really like the production on this, the way it builds.
Nice writing, Leon, lots of good lines. Favorite:
"My heart was open, not yet broken
My clay was ready for the shaping"
Good vocals and harmonies, nice guitar fills and outro solo.
Quite long at almost six minutes, but it didn't seem long.
Good one guys, enjoyed! Thanks Dave - tried to keep it under 6 minutes (just) - clearly one of those album tracks that follows the single.... Peter
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Hello!
Everything about this is so good! Those are some fabulous lines ... wonderful writing! Great backing tracks and mix. Totally enjoyed my listen ... nice!
Wishing you the very best. Take care and be safe.
Alan
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String rhythm guitar! Wonderfully written song. Magical how you build it. "Eager not to keep the future waiting". Man, this song really grows to the glory. Perfect choice of instruments. Well mixed, and super vocals. Thanks Marty appreciate that. Peter
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Interesting, disparate elements that you managed to make work together, kudos for that. Kept my attention despite the length. Good job!
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Your song evokes a peaceful feeling. Love the harmonies--adds a pleasing dimension.
The first line of the chorus stands out: "My heart was open, not yet broken."
Ooooh. Love the guitar solo at 3:57. Man does that fit right in.
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Nice work to both of you. Vocals sound like Dylan circa "Nashville Skyline" period. Wonderful lead guitar playing. Lovely little song.
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Hi Peter and Leon,
that's a very nice one. Very good lyrics, well sung and perfect choice of backing tracks. Love the part when the guitar falls in and the BGV are also very cool. And, Peter, you never disappoint with yourt solos - even if they are short like this one they're great.
Very good stuff, gentlemen!
All the best,
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Leon & Peter...
"My heart was open, not yet broken
My clay was ready for the shaping
I longed to fly away, rise above the fray
Eager not to keep the future waiting"
Nice.
Cool production. The BIAB vocals are a nice addition. And good use of the accordion. Nice guitar. Well sung. Well mixed.
I enjoyed all 6 minutes of it!
fj Thanks floyd appreciate the review. Peter
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Leon & Peter, Well sung both the lead and harmony. Nice guitar solos. I stayed engaged through the entire song. Good mix and great listen, Tom Thanks Tom - enjoyed your new one. Peter
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Hi PeterF,
Very romantic song with lyrics that make us live the story told. Soft atmosphere and clarity in the voice. Well done.
Best new year
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"Eager not to keep the future waiting"
Hey ya'll, that line and the solo outro are worth
the price of admission!
Leon, have you EVER written a throwaway lyric?
Well sung, well produced and we've enjoyed
our listens.
You boys are quite the team!
J&B
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Great song Peter! You really out did yourself on those lyrics. Fine writing.
I really enjoyed this. Happy Holidays.
Thanks David. Peter
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