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https://soundcloud.com/user-619066495-714650428/god-wins-vocals"God Wins!" Verse 1 Don't be afraid No, don't ya fear Don't ya be troubled By evil you hear Pray to the Father In the name of His Son That His kingdom comes That His will be done Chorus Don't be deceived by the devil Or listen to the lies he uses But be of good cheer my friend Read the good book and see how it ends God Wins! The devil loses Verse 2 God has a hold of you Tight in His hands Put trust in Him And not trust in man Repent from your sins From all be set free Let God cast them all To the bottom of the sea Chorus Pay no heed to the evil one For he's the one who acuses But be of good cheer my friend Read the good book and see how it ends God Wins! The devil loses Yes, be of good cheer my friend Read the good book and see how it ends God Wins! The devil loses God Wins! (Spoken) The devil loses... Band: Style: Unfazed Key: G Bass****** 2489: Bass, Acoustic, Bow HeldSimple Drums***** RealDrums=FootStompWaltz: a: Stomp Guitar 1** 2054: Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking CountryWaltz Guitar 2** 3177: Guitar, Acoustic, Rythm, CampfireWaltz Harmonica* 2854: Harmonica, Background CountryBalladJellyRoll
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Great to hear something positive and encouraging Bawb.
There's comfort to be found in these lines if one believes.
The simple arrangement works really well.
There're a few suggestions I'd make but I know you'll not be revisiting this to tweak.
Cheers
rayc
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I like the melody on this.
The acoustic instrumentation works well here.
Oooo, I like that abrupt ending too.
"Don't be deceived by the devil
Or listen to the lies he uses"
I see this too often and people don't even realize the deception.
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Nice melody and I like the changes you used. Good write!
And man, that vocal! Would love to hear you sing blues sometime but I know that's not your thing.
Good song, enjoyed.
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Hello Bawb,
I'm not a believer, but you made a nice song! A simple, but sweet melody.
Your vocals get stronger as the song continues. There is no doubt at all; you are a true believer!
I had to smile reading Dave's post on singing the Blues or Soul. Why don't you give it a try? Dave can play soul very well.
There are wonderful parts in some movies where this happens in churches. In no time everyone sings along there.
So you can read I have enjoyed your song And the ending: God wins!!!
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Bawb...sometimes simplicity is the most profound way to present Truth...so well said and so good presented unplugged...I am a believer and ultimately "God Wins"...that's the Alpha and Omega of it...I loved this...thanks for posting...Dan
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Bawb,
Great melody and excellent vocal... You can really wail!
Bob
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Well done!
Always love the passion in your voice.
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Excellent song. Passionate vocal. Well done..
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Bawb,
A powerful vocal. The simple backing works well to show it off, too.
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Very cool! I applaud the sentiment in this song! I feel the same way. Thanks!!!  P.S. Recent polls indicate about 80% of Americans are sick of all the nonsense going on and when the salt of the earth finally decide to speak up (which is happening) the Bozos who think they are running the show literally will not know what hit them. People are fed up. From every creed, color, stripe and ideology they have had it. Just watch. It's about to get real.
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P.S. Recent polls indicate about 80% of Americans are sick of all the nonsense going on and when the salt of the earth finally decide to speak up (which is happening) the Bozos who think they are running the show literally will not know what hit them.
People are fed up. From every creed, color, stripe and ideology they have had it. Just watch. It's about to get real. Feeling rather menacing today, are we? The supernatural high school football game spirit of "God versus Satan 2021" can be fun enough, even for a heathen such as myself, but now you're identifying your enemies as human and talking about people getting hurt and that's less so. Anyway, last time someone told me to "just watch, it's about to get real" was right before September 25th, when Trump was supposed to return to the White House, trailing clouds of glory and bear spray. Do you have a specific date in mind?
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Good write, and very passionate performance!!! Enjoyed it!! Take care. Greg
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Any excuse to hear your great singing works for me. Nice work as always!
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Outstanding song. Your vocals are wonderful and your lyrics are interesting. Great mix too. The band adds just the right touches where needed. I like it!
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That vocal is... something else. A whole lot of Tom Waits, only in a higher register.  Melodic, and the accompaniment works nicely. I especially like the hold at the end. The only bit that threw me off was: Repent from your sins
From all be set free
Let God cast them all
To the bottom of the seaSince "all" is twice removed from "sins", it took me a second to notice that those phrases were connected. But unlike me, I'm sure your intended audience will immediately get the reference. 
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Deceptively simple tune coupled to a strong lyric that is presented with deep conviction. Good job all round, Bawb.
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