Hi Ray,

I think I prefered your former songs more. Here you are hiding your vocals again behind the instruments.
That's a pity, because the lyrics deserve a brighter and louder voice and -for me- even harmonics or doubles.
The band is also not really expressive. No instrument claimed attention.
If I may give this song a color, it would be close to grey.
Sorry for this and I fear I make you angry, but because I've heard many good sounding songs from you, I know you can do better, much better.
But... I only heard March 24 and not the previous one.

And yes, I liked the lyrics, brought like a machinegun!

When do we drink a rum together?
Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130