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https://soundcloud.com/user-564042721/defianceCopied from XtraStyles forum. My last entry would have been a folk ballad if not for this competition & may move that way later, but this is such a great sounding style I had to have a go. Style is _BROKEN.STY (Broken Neoclassical Metal) GuitarCustom Synth is Synth/Plugin Loaded RealTracks in style: 1009:Bass, Electric, HardRockThrash Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 2336:Viola, Background, Pop Ev 085 (1TrackStringSection) RealTracks in song: ~1029:Guitar, 12-String Electric, Fingerpicking Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 642:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockThrashHollow Ev 085 Loop in Song: AcousticDrumFullKit\Metal - gl_tomtoms100a ev16.wav RealTracks in style: 2338:Violin, Background, PopLow Ev 085 (1TrackStringSection) RealDrums in style: RockThrashHalfTimeEv16^9-a:Snare , Tom Groove , b:Snare, Open HiHat Some background: Between 1869 and the late 1930s, over 100,000 juvenile migrants were sent to Canada from the British Isles during the child emigration movement. Motivated by social and economic forces, churches and philanthropic organizations sent orphaned, abandoned and pauper children to Canada,some as young as 4years old.It was touted as a "Golden Bridge" to a better life, but many were ill treated and abused and all were separated from whatever family they had left and became indentured labourers and servants until adulthood. This song imagines what it must have taken to endure such a childhood. Defiance you`ve seen that colour that colour before when they tell you daddy`s gone and you stare at the floor you`ve seen that ice that ice in their eyes the men whe tell children now you`ll work to survive you`re sold by the devil to the deep blue sea as you plough another furrow across that vast prairie innocence will burn, burn, burn in defiance you`ve heard those whispers whispers in the trees the voices of your brothers and sisters you had to leave you`ve seen that colour that colour before in the the dawn of a new world crossing your bridge of straw innocence will burn, burn, burn in defiance all you feel as you kneel a child ghost almost lost do as you`re told burning cold save your soul in defiance © Robert Cordrey Sept.2016
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A good write, Robert. I like the simplicity and power of the lyric.
The style is perfect for the song. Your vocal has a lot of power, as well...
Nice job on this.
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Floyd,
Thanks for your kind comments.
The vocal style is a bit outside my box, so I`m glad it holds together.
Robert
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Robert,
Wow! There's an awful lot to like about this. The beat is perfect for the song. Rather than simply being a groove, it actually drives the song and boosts the power of the already powerful lyrics. In addition, your performance rings with energy and sincerity. That ending that leaves the listener thinking "What? Is that it?" is perfect for forcing attention on the lyric content. It is also perfect prosody for the theme of 'defiance'.
I really like this a lot.
Regards,
Noel
MY SONGS...Audiophile BIAB 2024
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Noel,
Many thanks for your comments - its an easy subject to get behind with feeling.
I`m still in two minds about the ending ( first one I tried was longer & had a tempo change as well as the key & meter change on the current one). Perhaps the transition is too abrupt... anyone else giving a listen, go ahead and weigh in.
Robert
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Very cool . Loved the rhythm to this. Excellent vocal and lyric.
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Scott,
Yes, that rhythm section is fantastic. Getting back into music via BIAB has begun to stretch the vocal chops a little - it does encourage experimentation.
I`m happy you liked the song.
Robert
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Robert,
Great song. I could hear Mellencamp doing this one.
Bob
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Robert,
Like we already said in our comments on the contest forum:
A sad but very good song. Your vocal surely enhances the feeling.
Very good work!
Rob & Anne-Marie
Last edited by RnAM; 09/26/16 03:09 AM.
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Darkly powerful!! Music works great-the minor key, the driving beat, and the string playing over it. Really a lot of impact in the lyrics, and a heartfelt, intense vocal. Great job Robert!! Take care. Greg
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Great song - I loved the hard-panned guitars with the phasers on them overtop of the drumbeat. Chilling backstory, as well, I'd never heard of that child emigration movement.
Will - PG Music
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You handled a tragic subject very well here. Congratulations.
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Powerful, good song.
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Bob- I like John Mellencamp`s energy alot, so thanks for that.
Rob & Anne-Marie - Thank you again... I`m going to write a comedy song next to balance this out!
Greg - I appreciate your very kind comments.I`ve learn`t alot about singing lately by listening to the performances of contributors to this cool forum...and then relistening to my old heros & thinking "I`ll try that".
Will- Thanks for the listen. There`s so many ways to play with the guitar effects-I liked the way that doctored 12-string added a melodic element to the rhythm.
Yes, most Canadians are unaware of what happened... including many who are the descendants of those children.
David - Thank you!
Kenny - Thanks for listening, I`m glad the feeling behind the song came through.
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Powerful write with a fascinating production. We know a lot of effort went into this and it was assuredly worth it.
The RT choice really works well with the vocals.
We like this a lot.
J&B
Have an in-law who has written a couple of books on child labor -- gonna send him a link.
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Great song for me. Excellent real tracks and in the middle a great violin work.
Nice melody and vocal.
Sergio.
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Powerful write with a fascinating production. We know a lot of effort went into this and it was assuredly worth it.
The RT choice really works well with the vocals.
We like this a lot.
J&B
Have an in-law who has written a couple of books on child labor -- gonna send him a link. J&B, I really appreciate that - especially that you can hear good things in the production. re:child labour -Canada`s a great country, but there are some skeletons in the closet. Robert
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Great song for me. Excellent real tracks and in the middle a great violin work.
Nice melody and vocal.
Sergio.
Thank you ,Sergio. Whoever at PG Music paired those strings with the thrash bass & drums to come up with this style, deserves an award! Robert
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Robert, This is a great example of education through entertainment. I learned something while enjoying your wonderful production. Congrats on a fine song and performance. Tom
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Tom,
Many thanks for that... especially that it was an entertaining slice of history!
Robert
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