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Every Time ****** Song Summary ************* Key=D , Tempo 120, Length (m:s)=3:48 Style is _THICKET.STY (Thicket Songwriter Country Pop) plus the following RealTracks were added: RealTracks in song: ~ 1877 Fiddle, Soloist CountryRob Ev 120 RealTracks in song: ~2494:Piano, Acoustic, HeldChords 120 RealTracks in song: 1515:Guitar, Electric, Soloist CountryBrent Ev 120 Lyrics Every time I set and think about a girl driving country roads That top down jeep is driven by you Every time I make a wish for a bride and preacher man The long white veil is worn by you But I know my dream can’t come true That I’m just wasting my time ‘Cause I know I’ll see you with him And it will break this heart of mine Every night I say my prayers for the girl with long brown hair Praying that God’s watching over you Every time I shed a tear girl has me crying in my beer That tank top, daisy duke girl is you But I know my dream can’t come true And I’m just wasting my time ‘Cause I know I’ll see you kiss him And that just eats at this heart of mine Every time (Instrumental Break) But I know my dream can’t come true I’m just wasting my time ‘Cause I know I’ll see you kiss him And that just eats at this heart of mine Every time
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Love it Charlie.
The backing the voice and the lyrics spot on prosody.
Tapping my toes. Cheers.
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Hi Charlie,
What a great backing! And you sound really comfortable singing against it. I enjoyed the listen. Why don't we hear more from you? You've definitely got a talent to share.
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Great lyric writing Charlie.
The choice and blend of instruments has given the production substance and quality.
Enjoyed this from start to finish. Well put together and very well delivered.
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I enjoyed this Charlie; the lyrics conjured up pictures, which is not as easy as it might seem. Sincerely sung too, with just the right backing sounds.
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Hi Charlie.
A great blend of traditional and contemporary country.
Super backing track and an excellent arrangement - particularly liked the solo
The lyrics are good and you sing it well.
Enjoyed it!
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Charlie,
This was excellent - enjoyed listening.
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Charlie,
Love the refrain "Every Time". Enjoyed this a lot.
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Folks jumped on the accolades quickly and we agree.
The imagery is rich and textured and would make a great video.
And to steal from Noel "What a great backing! And you sound really comfortable singing against it. I enjoyed the listen. Why don't we hear more from you? You've definitely got a talent to share."
Indeed!
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Very enjoyable, Charlie.
A catchy chorus and just right instrumentation, but the highlight for me is your vocal. Your voice sounds really authentic ( I can`t think of a better word - in the way Jerry Garcia sounds so right on those Grateful Dead country tunes).
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You have a good voice Charlie and I think this style suits you well.
Reminded me a little bit of 'If I were a carpenter'in places
It certainly had my feet tapping..............every time.
Nice guitar and Lyrics
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Charlie,
This is a super write! My favorite song of yours yet. I enjoyed ev ver ry thing about it!! And your vocal and backing track iced the cake.
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Love it Charlie.
The backing the voice and the lyrics spot on prosody.
Tapping my toes. Cheers. Thanks for listening and commenting. I'm enjoying your new song too. Glad to see you back on the forum. Hi Charlie,
What a great backing! And you sound really comfortable singing against it. I enjoyed the listen. Why don't we hear more from you? You've definitely got a talent to share.
All the best,
Noel Thanks Noel. I appreciate your kind comments. Great lyric writing Charlie.
The choice and blend of instruments has given the production substance and quality.
Enjoyed this from start to finish. Well put together and very well delivered. Thanks Trevor. I'm glad you enjoyed your listen. I enjoyed this Charlie; the lyrics conjured up pictures, which is not as easy as it might seem. Sincerely sung too, with just the right backing sounds.
John Thanks. I'm glad you stopped by for a listen. Hi Charlie.
A great blend of traditional and contemporary country.
Super backing track and an excellent arrangement - particularly liked the solo
The lyrics are good and you sing it well.
Enjoyed it!
ROG. Thanks Rog. Yes, that particular solo sounded to me how I would have approached the solo if I could actually do one. Thanks for listening. Charlie,
This was excellent - enjoyed listening.
Bob Thanks Bob. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Charlie,
You've put some very fine Instrumental fills in the backing track which altogether make a perfect blend with your voice. A refreshing country song with one of your best vocals we think.
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I was trying to think of a way to say this, so PLEASE hear me out. I know this song was well written because I felt sorry for YOU! I literally thought to myself "How awful to have that happen to such a great guy!" Then I remembered this was just a song! *If this is from personal experience, just let me believe it's "just a song"  Great job!
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Hi Charlie,
We loved it! Although it's traditional country, it still hass an element of a more contemporary song. That's a good combination, in our opinion. As has been said previously ... great backing tracks! Superb in every way! Wish we heard from you more often!
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Charlie, This is without a doubt your best vocal. Very comfortable and confident. A good write that is very well produced. Nice going. Tom
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Charlie,
Love the refrain "Every Time". Enjoyed this a lot.
Regards,
Bob I got the refrain idea from a Ralph Murphy lecture on YouTube. Repeat the title within the first 60 seconds and average at least 7 repeats. Glad you enjoyed your listen. Folks jumped on the accolades quickly and we agree.
The imagery is rich and textured and would make a great video.
And to steal from Noel "What a great backing! And you sound really comfortable singing against it. I enjoyed the listen. Why don't we hear more from you? You've definitely got a talent to share."
Indeed!
J&B Thanks for listening and the kind comments. I thought the imagery would be good for a video too but I'm not so sure that doing a video is a sharable talent I have. Very enjoyable, Charlie.
A catchy chorus and just right instrumentation, but the highlight for me is your vocal. Your voice sounds really authentic ( I can`t think of a better word - in the way Jerry Garcia sounds so right on those Grateful Dead country tunes).
Robert Thanks for the nice comments and GD comparison. That's quite a compliment. You have a good voice Charlie and I think this style suits you well.
Reminded me a little bit of 'If I were a carpenter'in places
It certainly had my feet tapping..............every time.
Nice guitar and Lyrics
Paul Thanks Paul. I appreciate you taking time to listen and comment. Glad you enjoyed it. Charlie,
This is a super write! My favorite song of yours yet. I enjoyed ev ver ry thing about it!! And your vocal and backing track iced the cake. Thanks Josie. I always look forward to your opinion and you've got me pretty stoked this time with such nice comments. Charlie,
You've put some very fine Instrumental fills in the backing track which altogether make a perfect blend with your voice. A refreshing country song with one of your best vocals we think.
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Charlie... this is good. Reminds me of PPL and that's a good thing.
Nice work. Good job on the song and the vocals.
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Everything sounds really good Charlie! Such an smooth flowing backing track with a great vocal! Thanks,Torrey
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I was trying to think of a way to say this, so PLEASE hear me out. I know this song was well written because I felt sorry for YOU! I literally thought to myself "How awful to have that happen to such a great guy!" Then I remembered this was just a song! *If this is from personal experience, just let me believe it's "just a song" Great job! LOL, no way I'll ever 'fess up to personal experience or not - To be clear, you can say these kind of things any way you choose and I'll gladly hear you out... I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Charlie
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Hi Charlie,
We loved it! Although it's traditional country, it still has an element of a more contemporary song. That's a good combination, in our opinion. As has been said previously ... great backing tracks! Superb in every way! Wish we heard from you more often!
Alan & Di So glad to see you guys hanging around with us here on the forum again and thanks for taking time to take this one for a spin. Charlie, This is without a doubt your best vocal. Very comfortable and confident. A good write that is very well produced. Nice going. Tom Thanks Tom. Glad to see you're feeling better. I appreciate your comments. Charlie... this is good. Reminds me of PPL and that's a good thing.
Nice work. Good job on the song and the vocals.
Thanks for the PPL comparison. They were the bar I set for myself very early in my songwriting. Just being close feels good. Everything sounds really good Charlie! Such an smooth flowing backing track with a great vocal! Thanks,Torrey Torrey, thanks for listening.
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Hello, Charlie
You have a very good voice.
The chord progression is unique and new.
This is a contemporary Country.
As Noel said, you sound really comfortable singing against the great backing track.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
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Charlie,
You put together a nice band to back you on this excellent song.
Some really nice musical moments and very well performed.
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Hello, Charlie
You have a very good voice.
The chord progression is unique and new.
This is a contemporary Country.
As Noel said, you sound really comfortable singing against the great backing track.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi Thanks for your gracious comments. I've always liked how that chord progression flows on uptempo songs. It doesn't work so well in ballads I think. Regarding my vocals, I ended up using an old Nady RM-2 Ribbon mic and it seemed to have a better tone than the first mic I used that made my voice sound thin. Must have helped a bit this time. Thanks for listening and taking time to comment. Charlie,
You put together a nice band to back you on this excellent song.
Some really nice musical moments and very well performed.
Peter Thanks Peter. This was a fun project. It all came together rather quickly.
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Charlie,
This is a terrific listen. A solid country rock write with nice imagery and emotion (sad as it might be). (Ralph has a way of "hitting the nail on the head" in his concepts - and a sweetheart of a guy). The repeat of "every time" works really well (every time!).
A really nice collection of instruments - all used at appropriate times - for a full, smooth sound. Excellent mix. There are elements of a "modern sound", but overall, for me, harkens back to the best of the beginnings of country rock - Flying Burrito Brothers, Poco, Graham Parsons, early Eagles...
As others have noted, your vocal on this is excellent... really "in the pocket" for the sound...
Nice.
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Great song Charlie!! This is so easy to listen to. Very engaging lyric, and such a pleasant, slightly retro vibe (little Grateful Dead). Your vocal is so nice. I'm conflicted about the stops (maybe too many in succession) but everything else absolutely knocks me out. Awesome!! Take care. Greg
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The song has been around awhile but you've really put some energy into the performance and made the song sound new to me. Personally I think this is your best performance to date.
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Charlie,
This is a terrific listen. A solid country rock write with nice imagery and emotion (sad as it might be). (Ralph has a way of "hitting the nail on the head" in his concepts - and a sweetheart of a guy). The repeat of "every time" works really well (every time!).
A really nice collection of instruments - all used at appropriate times - for a full, smooth sound. Excellent mix. There are elements of a "modern sound", but overall, for me, harkens back to the best of the beginnings of country rock - Flying Burrito Brothers, Poco, Graham Parsons, early Eagles...
As others have noted, your vocal on this is excellent... really "in the pocket" for the sound...
Nice.
floyd Thanks for listening Floyd. Yea, I spent some time watching Mr. Ralph's YouTube lecture. It seems he takes the #1 hits from Pop and Country each year and analyzes them to determine what common elements they share. It was really worth the time. This song encompassed several of his 'sure hit' elements so I thought I'd float it out on the forum. I'm blaming my ribbon mic for my vocals having tone this time.... And for "in the pocket", I'm pleased that you and several others have picked up the vibe this song falls into the Country Rock genre. It's my favorite place to be. Great song Charlie!! This is so easy to listen to. Very engaging lyric, and such a pleasant, slightly retro vibe (little Grateful Dead). Your vocal is so nice. I'm conflicted about the stops (maybe too many in succession) but everything else absolutely knocks me out. Awesome!! Take care. Greg Hi Greg. Thanks for listening and taken time to comment. The stops were one area of the song I wasn't completely satisfied with in the end. I would have preferred that each would be a bit more abrupt and have more pop to them. I didn't spend a lot of time trying to correct that, but the time I did spend never yielded any satisfaction. The succession of five was the best sounding out of all that I tried. I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the song. I always appreciate your analysis and suggestions. The song has been around awhile but you've really put some energy into the performance and made the song sound new to me. Personally I think this is your best performance to date. Thanks Jim. This is a personal favorite of mine as well. Maybe it caused me to put a bit more into my performance. I've always liked the song but felt it could be improved on, especially the lyrics. The Ralph Murphy video helped motivate the lyrics rewrite. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Love the feel of this one,
backing tracks sound really good
good write, nice flow
Enjoyed my listen Charlie
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Love the feel of this one,
backing tracks sound really good
good write, nice flow
Enjoyed my listen Charlie
Kenny I'm glad you enjoyed it Kenny. Thanks for stopping by. Charlie
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Really great song Charlie.
Excellent country vibe, great lyrics. This is one my favorites of yours.
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Really great song Charlie.
Excellent country vibe, great lyrics. This is one my favorites of yours. Thanks David. Glad you stopped by. Try to keep Little Jimmie Waits on track and don't let him wander too close to the bus station or he'll be moving on. Charlie
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Excellent tune Charlie. Vocal was super. Loved the violin.
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Excellent tune Charlie. Vocal was super. Loved the violin. Thanks Scott. I appreciate the comments.
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Hi, there, "Charlie Fogle"...
I think the term "country" in "country music" is a misnomer. Let's put the word "truth" in front of the word "music", and then we'll be closer to describing what we're getting when we listen to it...
Mr. Fogle, from the opening verse of "Every Time" and all the way through to the end, a series of images connected to some universally experienced feelings rolls right on by our ears like a big, battered and road-dusted rig carrying a heavy cargo of painful memories. And if I didn't know the song was a product of BIAB, I'd ask you who your "sidemen" were. Your chord changes reflect the bitter taste of your lyrics.
Your singing voice has that quality of long-accepted sadness that sounds quite authentic to me, which makes it all the more easier to understand why forum member “HearToLearn” commented:
“I literally thought to myself, ‘How awful to have that happen to such a great guy! Then I remembered this was just a song!”
I’m hearin’ him loud n’ clear! “Every Time” is like a monologue of wistful recollections set to music.
I’d put another quarter in that jukebox, anytime…
LOREN (a.k.a. “bluage”)
"Music is what feelings sound like."-- borrowed from a Cakewalk Music Creator forum member, "Mamabear".
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Hi, Charlie !:))
Like this tune and the
way you treat it !:))
Great Country with a
big C
Can see you performing this
at some Honky Tonk with
all people dancing !
Cheers
Dani
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Great, Charlie! This is easily my favorite of yours. Love the backing, and your vocals fit it well. Good job on the lyrics as well. Really enjoyed it!
Steve
Steve Young Music"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of." - Robert Schumann
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Hi, there, "Charlie Fogle"...
I think the term "country" in "country music" is a misnomer. Let's put the word "truth" in front of the word "music", and then we'll be closer to describing what we're getting when we listen to it...
Mr. Fogle, from the opening verse of "Every Time" and all the way through to the end, a series of images connected to some universally experienced feelings rolls right on by our ears like a big, battered and road-dusted rig carrying a heavy cargo of painful memories. And if I didn't know the song was a product of BIAB, I'd ask you who your "sidemen" were. Your chord changes reflect the bitter taste of your lyrics.
Your singing voice has that quality of long-accepted sadness that sounds quite authentic to me, which makes it all the more easier to understand why forum member “HearToLearn” commented:
“I literally thought to myself, ‘How awful to have that happen to such a great guy! Then I remembered this was just a song!”
I’m hearin’ him loud n’ clear! “Every Time” is like a monologue of wistful recollections set to music.
I’d put another quarter in that jukebox, anytime…
LOREN (a.k.a. “bluage”)
Loren, thank you for such a gratifying and encouraging post. I can't think of anything that can put a bigger smile on my face today than your comments. I truly appreciate it. Charlie Hi, Charlie !:))
Like this tune and the
way you treat it !:))
Great Country with a
big C
Can see you performing this
at some Honky Tonk with
all people dancing !
Cheers
Dani
Thanks Dani. I'd just hope that honky tonk is beach front somewhere so you can come join us when you're done surfing... Great, Charlie! This is easily my favorite of yours. Love the backing, and your vocals fit it well. Good job on the lyrics as well. Really enjoyed it!
Steve
Thanks for stopping by for a listen and taking time to comment. Glad you enjoyed it. Charlie
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Love this one! Nice vocal, and the "every time" refrain is very effective. Enjoyed the listen!
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Love this one! Nice vocal, and the "every time" refrain is very effective. Enjoyed the listen! Thanks for listening and the kind comments. Charlie
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Super arrangement! Well written and performed.
much enjoyed!
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Super arrangement! Well written and performed.
much enjoyed! I appreciate your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed it. Charlie
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I just had to find another of your songs...
Nice job on this one also!
Jim
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Nicely done - really vivid lyricism, and the tune flows tremendously well. It has a great groove and some memorable progressions, and the vocals on this are top notch.
Great work and thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
Deryk
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