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#455038 - 02/01/18 03:50 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
molsenhouse Offline
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Deryk and Ember,

Thanks for your overwhelming response. It means a lot to me.
And you know, couldn't made this production without BiaB! So thanks to all PG and all the staff!!! :-)
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#455039 - 02/01/18 04:03 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: Belladonna]
molsenhouse Offline
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Belladonna,

Thanks for paying attention to the song and the lyrics.
And big thanks to my dear friend Norma Berry, for language consultation! Here it is:

The World Won't See

You walked the Earth on naked feet
You saw those who had nothing to eat
You gave them fish, you gave them bread
You even raised the dead

You told the leaders they were wrong
You talked about a Kingdom to come
You returned to woman dignity lost
You were willing to pay the cost

But, the world won't see
The world won't see
Our eyes can't meet
It's you and it's me

You taught about a Fathers love
You were revealed by a stainless dove
You raised from the waters
You poured your Holy Spirit on sons and daughters

But, the world won't see
The world won't see
Our eyes can't meet
It's you and it's me

Jesus is Your Name
And I carry my shame
All my sins and my loss
I lay my burden at Your cross

But, the world won't see
The world won't see
Our eyes can't meet
It's you and it's me

But, the world won't see
The world won't see
Our eyes can't meet
It's you and it's me
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#455245 - 02/02/18 05:25 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
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This truly great! Great vocal! The production is stellar. Very unique and I really enjoyed every second of it. Bravo, Tom

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#455778 - 02/05/18 09:55 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: RnAM]
molsenhouse Offline
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Originally Posted By: RnAM
Very refreshing approach.
Very cool vocals and very original percussion in this song.
Also detect a subtle Alan Parsons influence (and you can"t go wrong with that).

Rob and Anne-Marie


Thanks for listening, Rob and Anne-Marie!
And Alan Parsons… Wow! :-)
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#455798 - 02/05/18 11:42 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
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We don't often use that word but every now and then it simply fits.

This is a remarkable production that features supremely effective use of RT's, great vocals and a perfect mix.

More!

Kudos

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#455821 - 02/05/18 12:59 PM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
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Originally Posted By: molsenhouse
Thanks Scott!
The vocals somehow worked this time – I'm a guitar player, not a singer ;-)


BULL, you are a fantastic singer!

Everything that I wanted to say has already been said and I agree with it all 100%.

All I can add is this is a keeper.

PS - you are a great guitarist also.
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#455890 - 02/05/18 06:27 PM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: floyd jane]
Greg Johnson Offline
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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Einar,

This is beautifully done!

Really nice use of BIAB tracks that we don't see folks using often. There needs to be MORE of this kind of music in the Showcase.

The outro guitar is nice. Is that you?

Excellent vocals. Excellent mix.

Excellent music!

floyd


Floyd's right on both counts-it is beautifully done, and we need MORE of it!! This is such creative and interesting music. I hear "my era" in there! Wonderful!! Take care. Greg

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#455901 - 02/05/18 09:07 PM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
bluage Offline
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Registered: 12/10/09
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Loc: Washington State
Good evening, "molsenhouse"...

Before I stumbled on composing lyrics and music for songs, I paid practically no attention to the production side of music recording -- all I cared about was the music, mostly.

But now, after listening to "The World Won't See" (what an attractive title!), it's clear that a song's production is crucial to the "success" of the whole enterprise.

The instruments were cleanly and clearly recorded and well-distributed through space. The sound effects gave the song a sense of cosmic importance.

I thought the vocal track was very well-sung, though I missed some of the lyrics. If Jesus heard your song, I hope it would speed up his return, so he could help us begin to repair this wayward world!

Sincerely,

LOREN
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#455913 - 02/06/18 01:11 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
PeterF Offline
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Einar,

Some excellent reviews so all I'll add is:

Superb!

Peter

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#456137 - 02/07/18 02:00 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: Al-David]
molsenhouse Offline
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Originally Posted By: Al-David
Originally Posted By: RnAM
Very refreshing approach.
Very cool vocals and very original percussion in this song.
Also detect a subtle Alan Parsons influence (and you can"t go wrong with that).

Rob and Anne-Marie



Hi,

What a terrific change of pace for the forum! Simply beautiful - as Floyd said, more of this would be a good thing.

I fully agree with what Ron & Ann-Marie said. I think they said what I was thinking better than I might have said it. This is top-shelf all the way!


Alan


Thanks for listening and your nice comments, Alan. Really appreciate it!
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#456138 - 02/07/18 02:02 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: tommyad]
molsenhouse Offline
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Originally Posted By: tommyad
This truly great! Great vocal! The production is stellar. Very unique and I really enjoyed every second of it. Bravo, Tom


Thanks a lot, Tom!
I…eh‚ I'm running out of words.
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#456139 - 02/07/18 02:05 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: Janice & Bud]
molsenhouse Offline
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Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud


We don't often use that word but every now and then it simply fits.

This is a remarkable production that features supremely effective use of RT's, great vocals and a perfect mix.

More!

Kudos

J&B


Janice & Bud! I do run out of words of this overwhelming response – THANKS!
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#456144 - 02/07/18 02:52 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: MarioD]
molsenhouse Offline
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Originally Posted By: MarioD
Originally Posted By: molsenhouse
Thanks Scott!
The vocals somehow worked this time – I'm a guitar player, not a singer ;-)


BULL, you are a fantastic singer!

Everything that I wanted to say has already been said and I agree with it all 100%.

All I can add is this is a keeper.

PS - you are a great guitarist also.




THANKS Mario!

During the recording process I paid more attention to the vocals, melody and the phrasing, than I ever done before. Usually, I pay most attention to the guitars.
I wrote this song on a steel string guitar, chased a "wall-of-sound" idea, but – LESS IS MORE! The lyric demanded a lot of "air/space", and I decided to follow a simple guitar line that developed through the arrangement. Starting with a nylon string guitar on the verses, changing to steel string on the chorus and finally electric guitar at the end. And I used more time on the vocals and the other sounds than the guitars in this project.

Though, I still consider me a more of a guitar player, than a singer ;-)
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#456412 - 02/08/18 06:21 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
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Wow, what a really cool track. Very impressive.

Peace,

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#456535 - 02/08/18 07:04 PM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
Icelander Offline
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Man, that's one seriously innovative use of our precious application right there. I swear, even owners of the program would not be able to guess it if you hadn't told us!
Thanks so much for greatly expanding my views on the possibilities of this nifty tool smile

Oh, and the song itself isn't too shabby either cool
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#456553 - 02/08/18 10:46 PM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
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Amazing arrangement and very good vocals.
Awe inspiring.

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#456558 - 02/08/18 11:46 PM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: molsenhouse]
dani48 Offline
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Hi, Einar !


What a superb tune
and so brilliantly
performed and mixed !
Reminded me a little
of A HA !!!

Cheers
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#457904 - 02/17/18 03:19 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: Ian Ferrin]
molsenhouse Offline
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Originally Posted By: Ian Ferrin
Wow, what a really cool track. Very impressive.

Peace,

Ian




Thanks a lot, Ian!
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#457905 - 02/17/18 03:21 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: Icelander]
molsenhouse Offline
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Originally Posted By: Icelander
Man, that's one seriously innovative use of our precious application right there. I swear, even owners of the program would not be able to guess it if you hadn't told us!
Thanks so much for greatly expanding my views on the possibilities of this nifty tool smile

Oh, and the song itself isn't too shabby either cool




Thanks! Yes, this nifty tool is really a mind bender – or a music bender if you like ;-)
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#457906 - 02/17/18 03:29 AM [User Showcase] Re: The World Won't See [Re: RichMac]
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Originally Posted By: RichMac

Amazing arrangement and very good vocals.
Awe inspiring.

Cheers.



Thank you!
The arrangement is definitely a big part of how the song communicate to the listener. Still chasing the goal of writing (and arrange) my best song ever :-)
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