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Hi All, Here's something folky and a bit vintage sounding - this is called Avalanche. Summer days The lost and found Shades of green An old ghost town Voices fading Old telephones A changing world Outside the zone And I’m so buried I’m so buried I’m buried in your avalanche Pictures hidden Away in my mind Somethings going down The perfect crime Whispers falling On the pillow case Sad blue eyes Gone without a trace And I’m so buried I’m so buried I’m buried in your avalanche Bang your drum East to west Counter clockwise This is not a test Middle of nowhere In the morning skies The rain is falling On the time that flies And I’m so buried I’m so buried I’m buried in your avalanche All BIAB Tracks: 1008: Bass, Electric, ElecRock Ev 120 1681: Guitar, Acoustic, 12-String, Fingerpicking Ev 120 405: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 120 789: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CrossoverClean Sw16 090 Loop: vybez_70_shaker Loop: Chillout/Chillout - dimensions_145_choir Thanks for listening!  Bob
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Hi rsdean,
I like your voice and how you sing this. Reminds of more simpler times, when people had the spiritual space to explore honest moments and reflect. Thanks for sharing.
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Yep, folky and a bit vintage sounding.
Nice mix and vocals, evocative without being specific.
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Bob, vintage & folky indeed - though the bass line is a bit busy - you've pulled together an ace arrangement and your intimate vocals work well within it.
I still get that pleasant Rod McKuen vibe.
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LPman,
Thanks - much appreciated.
Bob
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Bob,
Ethereal lyrics and that smoky texture to your voice which grounds the song nicely. Love that 12-string!
I`m enjoying your creative output-you are bringing us so many good songs.
Robert
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Spot on with the retro folk sound. Enjoyed the harmonies. Well done on the lyrics.Rob
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David,
Thanks - appreciated!
Bob
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Really nice work here It has a very, very unique quality to it. It definitely has a modern approach to it, and the vocal delivery adds an almost haunted vibe to it. Very interesting lyrics too to help propel the whole thing. You should be proud of this - thanks for sharing!
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Ray,
Thanks for listening - much appreciated.
Bob
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Love this mix. It is nice and soft and your vocals really shine.
Just a really well mixed, warm and intensely enjoyable song.
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Loved this tune Bob. Vocal really stands out. Really cool backtrack. One of my favorites. Well done
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I really loved the opening imagery: "Summer days; the lost and found. Shades of green, an old ghost town. Voices fading. Old telephones. A changing world outside the zone." Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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Robert,
Thanks so much - I appreciate that.
Bob
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A little folky with a vintage sound, just the way I like it.
Your vocal was top notch as was your mix but the lyrics took it over the top for me.
Excellent work that I thoroughly enjoyed.
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Love this Bob! Everything you've done with this song arrangement and production comes together with such a great vibe. Vintage with a modern edge. Well done.
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Bob,
What a great vibe this has! Love the vocal; meshes so well with the sound you’ve created. I’m not quite sure I follow the lyrics, BUT I’m not one to think it matters. To me, a song is a mesh of word, lyric, melody, harmony, etc. There’s enough mood and emotion here to make to keep me listening, and the chorus keeps it compelling. Very well done.
Kindest regards,
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Very nice, Bob! I'm a fan
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Boy, that is so darrn good!!!, I am amazed at the talent level on this forum, this song could be a top hit on radio, and should be!!!
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Cool song Bob!! Very hypnotic...spellbinding! RTs work perfectly for the style. Great job!! Take care. Greg
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Deryk,
I really appreciate that - thank you.
Bob
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David,
Appreciate the kind words...
Bob
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Scott,
Thanks very much - appreciated.
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Ember,
Thanks - that is very kind. Much appreciated.
Bob
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Mario,
I appreciate the kind review - thanks so much!
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Hey Josie, Thanks so much - I appreciate that! Bob
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Deej,
Thanks - that is very kind of you.
Bob
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Hello, Bob
Yes, your vocals really shine in this tune.
As rayc say, I also think the bass line is a bit busy.
But the total balance is not impaired.
I love the chord progression, the way to use F#.
(G - D - D/C# - Bm - F#)
Such usage of F#, III major against Tonic (D major in this tune) can be also heard in "Let It Be Me".
(The key of "Let It Be Me" is Gmajor, so the said chord is B major.)
One of my favorite usages.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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You've written and performed a song that fits so well in the wheelhouse your voice and style is perfect for. I really enjoyed this. All the elements of the song work together giving the song as a whole, a very cohesive feel. Again, a really enjoyable listen.
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A great feel on this one Bob, and I like the delivery of the excellent lyrics. The lilt of the guitars made me feel a twinge of nostalgia, thanks!
John
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"Summer days
The lost and found
Shades of green
An old ghost town
Voices fading
Old telephones
A changing world
Outside the zone"
Well, that will certainly grab your attention from the get go!
The lyric grabs you and never lets ago. We had to immediately listen again just to focus on the production (which was perfect for the feel of the lyric).
Ethereal was a good word that Robert used to describe the vibe and your vocal performance iced the cake.
Nice!!
J&B
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Dave,
Thanks - I appreciate that. I'm a big fan of your work as well.
Bob
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Clifton,
That is very nice of you. I appreciate the kind words.
Bob
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Greg,
Thanks so much for listening and the kind words.
Bob
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Shigeki,
You have a great ear for chords and progression.
Thanks - much appreciated.
Bob
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"Reflective" is the word that comes to mind. Both the write and the production, vocal, mix... Smooth. Easy on the ears... (sounds like something that might be done by a guy who lives in Woodstock... )
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Charlie,
I really appreciate that - thanks.
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John,
Much appreciated - thanks.
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Janice & Bud,
Thanks so much. I always appreciate hearing from you guys!
Bob
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A really nice song - lovely presentation, lyric and vocal.
Great work all round.
Peter
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Floyd,
Thanks - really appreciate that...
And yes, I LOVE Woodstock... LOL!
Bob
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Peter,
Thanks - much appreciated!
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