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Originally Posted By: Crossroads
Hi Floyd,

very nice and emotional. Do you have an original recording of it? Would be great to listen to it.

Very nicely arranged and like always marvbellously sung. Sounds good all the way.

A healthy and most happy New Year to you and yours and take care,

Stefan


Stefan - Happy New Year to you and Maha! Hoping it's a good one! We deserve it!!!


Originally Posted By: Derochette
Hi floyd Jane,
It's a very nice song that you offer us. Lots of emotion in your voice and very well written lyrics. Well done.


Have a pleasant end of the year and take good care of yourself.

Kindly regards
Derochette
alias JaniJackflash



Thanks, Derochette!!

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Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
It's been a long time since I went back to the early songs. I never thought any of my earlier stuff sucked...... I guess ignorance was bliss. I've since learned a few things that I didn't know then.

I like the song. Kinda slow but you know that. It shows that you knew a good amount about song crafting even then.

I enjoyed listening.


Learning what needs to go in the trash is an important part of growth in writing.

Thanks for the listen.


Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
A beautiful song. It's very quiet (even though there is music, etc.) While all broken hearts hurt, some leave a very sweet aftertaste as time moves on. I love how the second last line of the stanzas are counted by the hook line. Expertly done. I like it. The band captured the mood of the song perfectly.


jpt - thanks! appreciate that...

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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
In my last post, I mentioned how many songs I've written and how many I've thrown away.
As I said, I started writing when I was 14.
The first song I ever "kept" came about 6 years later (1975).
First time I had thought... "This doesn't totally suck."
smile

I only keep it still for the sake of nostaglia.
I figured I'd throw it against the wall here.
Warts and all.
Beginnings.
It's slow and meloncholy (my first real broken heart).
A 3-verse song. Standard for the times.
I quit writing 3-verse songs about 1985.

So...going back 45 years...


REALLY THERE'S NOTHING TO SAY

the sunshine won't get out of my eyes
the salt won't get out of my wounds
a new woman won't get out of my mind
but i'll probably make my move too soon
five hundred miles from my last mistake
and still it stands in my way
now everything hangs
on her next words
but really there's nothing to say

maybe she'll love me, maybe she won't
maybe i don't even care
maybe i'll find what i'm looking for
or maybe it couldn't be there
but every fool needs somebody who
can help him forget yesterday
so maybe i'll use my usual lines
but really there's nothing to say

i might tell the story of why i am here
how a broken heart lead the way
but a stronger man would have made his stand
i just walked away
so i'll spare you the details and myself the pain
of a woman who's that far away
perhaps i should write
i thought that i might
but really there's nothing to say

five hundred miles from my last mistake
and still it stands in my way
now everything hangs
on her next words
but really there's nothing to say
really
there's nothing to say


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RealTracks in style: ~364:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 065
RealTracks in song: ~2200:Guitar, Nylon, Background CountryBrent Ev 085
RealTracks in song: ~~369:Pedal Steel, Background Ev 065
MIDI SuperTracks in song: 2066:Piano, Rhythm NewAgeAnswers Ev16 110
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But, really...You can say something if you feel like it...
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Thanks for listening.

fj


Very nice song, also great vocal color.

Happy New Year guys smile


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What this proves is that you always have been and outstanding song writer, arranger, and musician.

Excellent work as usual. I didn't hear the original but this version is fantastic.


I want my last spoken words to be "I hid a million dollars under the........................"

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Originally Posted By: furry
Floyd this is a beauty, loved it from start to finish


Thanks, Graham.


Originally Posted By: Al-David
Came back to hear the stripped-down version. I like it a lot. But I think a really good song will speak for itself as long as the arrangement and mix are anywhere near decent. This song does, indeed, speak for itself. And for the writer.

Alan


Alan - thanks for the return visit smile


Originally Posted By: F.M.M.
Hi floyD you are very gifted indeed so young to write like that. great choice of instruments mixed perfect thanks for sharing this song Eric


Thanks, Eric. Good of you to stop by....

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That's a great song Floyd! Glad you reached back in time to resurrect this one! Tugs at the ole heartstrings! T




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FJ, You are definitely a very gifted wordsmith. We are extremely fortunate to have you on these PG Forums.

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Well, this may have been written when you were 20 or so but it will hang with anyone. The Beatles were not writing craft level songs or lyrics and some of their best product was 'mistakes' when they were writing in their early 20's...

Really enjoyed the history, arrangement, production and performance on this.

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Originally Posted By: Angelomusic
Both your maturity and sensitivity shine on that tune. Beautifully written and executed. The vocals and guitar blend so well together. Technically solid as well. It was a great listen, thank you!


Angelo - thanks for the great comments!


Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
FJ,
Excellent resurrection. Sad and beautiful ballad. Listens as it was written yesterday. You kept the spirit of it very well for nearly half a century. Good stuff. Really There's Nothing More To Say... except for your description of the track. You meant this to rhyme, right? :

"I only keep it still for the sake of nostalgia.
I figured I'd throw it against the wall here.
Warts and all.
Beginnings.
It's slow and melancholy (my first real broken heart).
A 3-verse song. Standard for the times.
I quit writing 3-verse songs about 1985."

Thank you for sharing.

Misha.


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Originally Posted By: Gemini

Very nice song, also great vocal color.

Happy New Year guys smile


Thanks, Nikola...


Originally Posted By: MarioD
What this proves is that you always have been and outstanding song writer, arranger, and musician.

Excellent work as usual. I didn't hear the original but this version is fantastic.


Thanks, Mario...


Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
That's a great song Floyd! Glad you reached back in time to resurrect this one! Tugs at the ole heartstrings! T


Thanks, Torrey. Great to see you back around...


Originally Posted By: Don Gaynor
FJ, You are definitely a very gifted wordsmith. We are extremely fortunate to have you on these PG Forums.


Don - always great to hear from you!! You were one of the first people on the forum to respond to my music... I appreciate it...


Originally Posted By: Charlie Fogle
Well, this may have been written when you were 20 or so but it will hang with anyone. The Beatles were not writing craft level songs or lyrics and some of their best product was 'mistakes' when they were writing in their early 20's...

Really enjoyed the history, arrangement, production and performance on this.


Thanks, Charlie. Always good to hear from you...

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Most people could write songs their whole life and never come up with something this good!! It really is sweet, and sad! Love your performance on this.....sure you couldn't sing like that back then. A truly lovely song!!! Thanks for sharing my friend! Take care. Greg

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