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Hello biab friends. I wrote THIS SONG for my keenager friend who recently celebrated her 60th. All comments good or bad are welcome. Lyrics Come on girl don't hesitate Have some fun it's not too late Break that chain around your neck Throw away your self respect Come on and do it, do it, don't say maybe Go Crazy, Forget that you're a Lady Don't explain to those you know Your new wardrobe of sexy clothes Kiss your boring self goodbye This witches brew will get you high Come on and do it, do it, don't say maybe Go Crazy, Forget that you're a Lady The time has come to raise the bar Go get 'em girl you are a star Your Mama's rules are no excuse It's up to you to cut the noose. Come on and do it, do it, don't say maybe Go Crazy, Forget that you're a Lady =============================== Key F#m Tempo 135 Style is _BOOGIE1.STY (Texas Boogie 2 Guitars) RealTracks in style: 386:Bass, Electric, Blues Chuck Sw 102 RealTracks in style: 651:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm TexasBoogie Sw 140 RealTracks in style: 654:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm TexasBoogieShuffle Sw 140 RealTracks in song: 1586:Guitar, Electric, Soloist TexasBluesRockShuffleBrent Sw 130 RealDrums [in style:NashvilleShuffle^01-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride 1588:Guitar, Electric, Soloist TexasBluesRockShuffleSol Sw 130 EZKeys Piano Me - Organ and Strum GS-2 Power Chords.
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Hi, Gary. If you put the song title on top, in bold, and linked to the SoundCloud, it'll be easier for lazy people like me to find. Just sayin'. Catchy, and harmony (with effects) on the chorus is especially cool. The fade at the end was a bit abrupt. Nicely done!
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Hi David. Thanks for listening and also your tip.....hopefully fixed. cheers Gary.
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vfun lyrics. like the gtr. maybe vary the drums ... like the way yuo bring it all back down then up again. very hooky. cute ending....might i suggest...lol...the lady in question say something cute/crazy right at end of song... eg >come here all you big boys lets partay<
overall..my honest comment is with a bit more production details/attention this song couild be played worldwide.. cos its such fun.
well done gary...i mean it...ITS ORIGINAL ! THIS IS A VERY HOOKY SONG ! COULD BE A MAJOR HIT IMHO. after repeated listens gary...a zillion thumbs up. i smell a big hit....with some re engineering.
happiness om
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Wow, so much more fun, entertaining and filled with wisdom than Happy Birthday. Very cool, Gary. This is a song for all ages.
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Hi Gary,
This is a good rocker. I like the harmonies in the choruses.
Well done.
Best Regards Nigel
Nigel Spiers Christchurch, New Zealand info@nzacoustics.com
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This really does have a classic rock vibe. Delivering an impowering message with great lyrics. Band sounds good, vocals rock!
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Garry, Very picturesque tune. A fun video would compliment this wonderful song. Well constructed and played! Vocals- super. Slowdown ending is a candy. Mixed very well. Nothing I would change. Good one! Thank you for sharing.
Misha.
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The guitar solo could come up a dB...the power chords seem louder than it. I REALLY like the organ flourishes.
It's a rocking tune for certain and your additions help make it all the better. The DY of lady on the outro gets swallowed abit...is it possible to lift that a little as I heard the outro as "You're a layyyyyyyyyeeeee". Well done, a cracker.
Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
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Gary, a real toe tapper. Super vocal and lyrics with a great message. The backing band was excellent.
Great rock n roll!
I just posted a selfie and all of the responses were get well soon!
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Cool driving rocker. Super vocal. Loved the guitars. Well done
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Greetings David C , Justanoldmuso, Marty, Nigel, C'ptn Moto, Misha, Ray, Mario, Scott C. Hope Y'all don't mind a collective big thankyou. I appreciate and feel privileged to receive your comments , be it cheers and/or jeers. I learn a lot from you guys and gals and it sometimes feels like we are all playing in the same band together. . p.s. Thanks also to those who have given it a spin regardless of commenting. (that's not a dig , I genuinely mean it.) best regards Gary.
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Gary. re all playing in the same band together. i feel compelled to reply thats a genius happy thought. great kudos to you for that wonderfull comment.
bestest regards om
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Good one Gary. Rocking all the way. A young Neil Young.
Vic
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Great rocker, good intro riffing, classic stuff with Deep Purple vibe (organ fits well). Nice funny and positive message. Enjoyed your vocals. Very good instrument selection, guitars are in fire. Strong drumming, sounds like there's two drummers. This should be a hit!
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Cool tune. I like it. nice work on it.
Nothing like a good girl needs to go bad song.
You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.comAdd nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both. The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.
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Rock on man. Excellent. Great performances by you and the BiaB folks. Getting a little David Crosby vibe here. And all is wrapped in a mix that sounds excellent on the KRKs. Well done! J&B PS Kinda easy to fall into the theme as we recorded a PD song called Wild Women
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Very cool idea, and well executed song!! We all have to hang on to whatever remnants of youth that we can! I'm sure she appreciated this!! Well done!! Take care. Greg
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Vic, Janne, Herb, Janice and Bud ♥, Greg. Thankyou everyone for generously lending me your ears and gifting me your kind comments. Apologies for this brief and late nowcast , but we have been busy welcoming two new grandkids to this crazy planet warmest regards Gary.
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Hi Gary,
A very rocky song. I like it very much. I agree with Ray the leadguitar is too shy. Give him some more power! The vocals are very cool.
Well done! Hans
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