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THERE'S STILL ROOM LEFT FOR YOU

This started out as an experiment with some new software and developed into something a little more. It's a bluesy Gospel tune that is very different from anything I've posted here! I will be tweaking this for quite a while, but I have it to a place where I feel comfortable posting it! Thanks once again for giving my music a listen! I truly appreciate it!

A technical note: Some of you may notice that I used the BIAB vocal oohs which are EV tracks in a 6/8 swing pattern. I made it work by splitting the audio track between every phrase and cut it down to fit.

BIAB
Vocal Oohs Ev 85

Me
Vocals, Guitars, Piano and Organ

For the main Drums, Bass and Piano tracks I used Toontrack products

There's Still Room Left For You
Words and music by
Torrey Bliss ©2022

You messed up the deed is done
You wanna turn the page
Yet it's been etched deep in stone
Still some just won't let it go
They condemn your soul
And say there's no hope for you

Oh come to the Savior who's waiting
With arms reaching out
Yes He will embrace you
Oh I do believe that in heaven
There's still room left for you

Your past just keeps hanging on
It won't leave you alone
Stuck under that cold dark cloud
It's time that you tried something new
Shake off those old blues
Listen to me please believe

Oh come to the Savior who's waiting
With arms reaching out
Yes He will embrace you
Oh I do believe that in heaven
There's still room left for you

This is a beautiful song Torrey... everything sounds so fine, especially the piano and your vocal... Lovely production.

Torrey testifies...
this has a solid gospel leaning without taking on the whole package with instrumentation - it remains Torrey Blissful.
Your cadence is unique and you're ace with melody as well as instrumentation.
The lead is lovely - spot on.

Torrey...I think 6/8 time is still the best way to present gospel music and you did a great job...you always do such a tasteful rendition of whatever you're presenting and this is no exception...I love the sync of the whole piece and I agree with rayc about not over producing the package...you know I love the message...reminds me of "There's Room at the Cross for You" except the song is nothing like that ...I always look forward to your next post...thanks Torrey.

Hi Torrey,

Yes I also love the 6/8 timing - suits the song and genre perfectly.

I particularly liked the singing and lead break.

Best Regards
Nigel

Nice tune. "There's still room left for you" - good hook line. You mixed everything well. Good use of the band too, especially that electric guitar during break.

Nice one Torrey. Elvis Costello-ish.
I hope that's a compliment.

Vic

Thanks bloc-head for the comments! I always appreciate it! T

Hi Torrey
You always manage to interpret different styles of music in your own way.
You do it really well
Because this makes your music interesting for many more people
The song is very sensitively played with a great sound
Your singing is absolutely on point
Just like your great guitar playing
Very nice song, Torrey
Many greetings
Andi ;-)

Very cool intro Torrey. Loved the dip into the minor chords. Gave the song such a cool vibe. The timing on those descending chords was perfect. Very difficult to do. Guitar was awesome as well as the vocal. Really really well done..

"Oh, it's the truth."

Amen. The intro, the build to the chorus, the guitar solo, the drums into the final chorus - this is excellent.

I really like your vocal - it's a good register for you, and to be honest, I didn't really recognize your voice until the high notes, because that's where your voice is most distinctive (sort of like Eric Woolfson in that regard).

Good write, too.

Someone mentioned Elvis Costello, and the pedal guitar reminds me of his "flirting with country" phase.

But mostly, it's a good Gospel song with a positive message, and that's what I enjoyed the most about it.

Thanks Ray! Your positive feedback is always encouraging! T

Yes, definitely different for you, I didn't recognize your voice at first. I got a Paul Simon with the Dixie Hummingbirds feel to it, too bad you can't hire an entire choir. Another great job and I would be surprised with anything less. Really enjoyed it!

Wonderful!

Love the piano and guitar, and the vocals too of course.

Always a pleasure to hear your music, Torrey, you are inspiration to us all I think

Torrey,

Excellent.

A strong write. Good vocals (as always). BGVs, too.

The mix is really well balanced. ALL the instruments are strong and clear. The vocals are perfectly placed in the mix.

The piano sounds great. Drums sound great. Bass is smooth and supportive.
Nice guitar work (of course).

Good stuff, start to finish. Well done. Excellent Music.

fj

Good one Torrey!

Sounds great man!

Thanks Dan for taking the time to listen and comment! T

Different, but in a good way. Nice gospel tune with very positive mood.
Lovely to hear those beautiful chords played with the piano. And the interplay with the guitar solo and the bass is very enjoyable. Excellent vocals really shine in this light arrangement.

Janne

Another beautiful song Torrey!
Different indeed, but definitely just as good as your other songs.
Great voice!

Rob and Anne-Marie

Man I love this song, the 6/8 timing is perfect, and everything about this song is done by his amazing grace!!

Torrey

Sounds great and nicely produced with various tools.

Excellent guitar break and vocals.

Enjoyed it.

Peter

That's a good song. Pretty solid biblical write that teases one who knows the hymn this one shadows well without getting too close to the other.

Nicely done.

Thanks Nigel for stopping by and having a listen! I appreciate it! T

Thanks jptjptjpt, I appreciate the kind words! T

I'm glad that I didn't miss this one. Everything is spot on. Great vocal and guitar chops, super tone on that axe.

The lyrics are the icing on the cake, loved them.

A great song - loved it.

Nice complexes melody, great gospel groove, sweet guitar playing, inspired lyric, excellent vocal, pro-mix and production. Nice key change to the guitar lead. Like everything about this track.

Thanks Vic! I'll take an Elvis Costello-ish. compliment any day! T

Two words apply to every song you post, Torrey: Professional and Talented. Man, you always stay on that high-standard. Each and every piece in the mix sits so well. Yes, this is different from you in many ways, but those remain constant. Very creative in your mathematical approach to BGVs works perfectly. Such a good write.

Takes us back to when we used to watch the Gaither Vocal Band Homecoming show.

Outstanding soulful vocal and guitar performances (and other tracks).

Well written and arranged also. The total package Mr. Bliss!


J&B

Thanks Andi! I really appreciate all the kind words! T

Torrey,
masterfully done musical piece. I think 6/8 worked very well, there is absolutely no feeling that it was forceful, sooth all the way. Very good vocals and mix. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.

Beautiful. Love the way your voice just shines. Great message too
Josie

Thanks Scott for taking time to listen and comment! T

Thanks David! I really appreciate your comments! T

Thanks TuneMonger! I always appreciate your comments! T

OMG I LOVED it! You sing so well, and the overall song is a blast.
I really appreciated the chord changes and how you toyed with the drums to create many layers of rythms.

Hi Torrey,

You are very active with all the songs I see coming from your hand.
And this one is a bit different from your other songs, but also terrific!
I like your vocals very much.
The piano also has a very nice/good full sound. I am searching fore some time to achieve this sound. Tell me your secret...

Hans

Thanks Dave! I appreciate it! T

Thanks Floyd! Your comments are always appreciated! T

Thanks David!

Torrey,
I've made mention of this before, I'm not a religious man so, this type of song doesn't fit my listening preference.
Having said that, the quality of your write and performance is stellar!

Nice job,
Moto

An absolutely beautiful , sophisticated, creation. This should become a classic
regards
Gary

Thanks Janne for 5he kind words!

Thanks Rob and Anne-Marie for the kind words! T

Thanks Ronnie! T

Thanks Peter! I appreciate it! T

Thanks Herb! I'm sorry but I don't know what the hymn is that you say this "shadows " maybe you mean something like "Amazing Grace "? It's got that same swing feel time signature. T

Thanks Mario! Your comments are always appreciated by me! T

Thanks Elliot!! I appreciate it! T

Thanks Marty! I appreciate all the kind words! T

Thanks J&B! I always appreciate your comments! T

Thanks Misha for the kind words! T

Thanks Josie! I really appreciate it! T

Thanks Angelo! I really appreciate that, especially coming from such a fine musician as yourself! T

Thanks Hans! I used the EZ Keys grand piano for this track and supplemented some of the parts playing my yamaha keyboard.

Thanks CaptainMoto for taking time to stop by for a listen and comment! T

This: https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=dtBW3BOVKHI&list=RDAMVMdtBW3BOVKHI

Similar theme but definitely not the melody or chord structure. I guess there have probably been hundreds of songs with a similar sentiment. I know of this song but it was not a factor in my composition.

Hi Torrey Bliss,

Nice orchestration, the Biab vocal was well integrated.

It is true that Toontrack is a great tool for drums.

It's well mixed and the whole is very pleasant.Well done.

Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash