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Well, I finally was able to find some time to write and mix a new tune! Whew, what a month! Anyway, I am really stoked, because I was able to hit a B4 at the end of the tune, and actually hold it--twice. Last time I checked I was stuck on G4 so I am making progress. Hope you like it. The main piano part was fun to play. 
One of These Daysby David Snyder https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs3/one-of-these-daysV1 One of these days I will write a melody sing what I want to sing see what I want to see I will leave myself behind Oh I will leave myself behind one of these days I may be free One of these days I may be free CH But today I can hardly make it off my knees and I try to sing but I only scream Oh baby maybe I’m just going through a phase Maybe I’m just going through a phase But I hope it will be over One of these days V2 One of these days I will find out what I need figure out what's killing me what I was meant to be I will break away from here Oh break away from here Put a boat out in the ocean If I can finally learn to steer CH But today I can hardly make it off my knees and I try to sing but I only scream Oh baby maybe I’m just going through a phase Maybe I’m just going through a phase But I hope it will be over One of these days Bridge Oh I don't know what I'm searching for but I know I want more I'll keep looking for a sign try to figure out my mind Before I lose it It might happen just in time CH But today I can hardly make it off my knees and I try to sing but I only scream Oh baby maybe I’m just going through a phase Maybe I’m just going through a phase But I hope it will be over One of these days Words and Music by David Snyder/ASCAP, Day of Faith Records Copyright 2023 David Snyder: Piano, Vocals, Additional Instrumentation, Arrangement, Mixing, Mastering, Production RealTracks in style: 3121:Bass, Acoustic, PopHalfNotesPush Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 3656:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm IndieGentlePush Ev16 080 RealDrums in Song: NashvilleRadioPowerBallad16^10-A RealDrums in style:Mallets, Claps, Shaker [Multi]
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1st thing I noticed was the centre of the sound stage was very crowded...perhaps move the acoustic over to the right to balance the piano.
B4 galore....and twice.
Good one, another semi confessional self assessment lyric that works well.
Good one David.
Cheers
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BRILLIANT. Absolutely blooming BRILLIANT. Did I tell you I think it's brilliant? Well, it is.
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David,
That's a great sound! Love the song and love the mix. Awesome vocal!
Bob
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David, you are one very talented individual!
Great lyricist, singer, and the master of many instruments.
I really liked this one.
Super vocal range.
As previously said this one is brilliant!
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Thanks Ray!
I will check out that mix balance on the next go around.
Thanks for the listen.
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Hello David
very good song
The song has a great background track
Your singing fits very well
And your piano work sounds great
It is fun to listen to the song
Good job in every respect David
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
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Great energy!!! I agree that that things could be separated out a bit and not sound so center dense (at least on my studio headphones). The vocals are raw and honest and that's good in these days of Blah and Bland. I enjoyed this one, as I said...great energy and good songwriting. Unload the center just a bit and I'm all in.
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Hey David...really great song...man can I identify with this one! somedays you hope that the effects of Father Time would or could back off a bit but he is who he is I guess...as stated earlier, the energy is great...I listened through my studio speakers so I can't comment on the panning...I'll leave that to the headphone guys...nevertheless I really like the song and the B4 was superb! best regards...Dan
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David,
I can't tell you how much it elates me to see you so active in the forum these days! I remember a time when you were absent for quite a while and the forum suffered from it! You are a vital part of this community!
Your creativity shines through again here with this lovely song! I like hearing your "solo" efforts along with your collabs!
I'm guessing you threw on a tighter pair of undies to hit those last notes lol!
Thanks, TB
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Very David Snyder.......and that's fine by me!!!! Love the energy and emotion!! and you are playing some really nice piano!!!
More than almost anyone, your songs grow on me as the song goes on.......start good and keep getting better!!!!! Take care. Greg
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Good, relatable lyrics, "I'll keep looking for a sign / try to figure out my mind / Before I lose it". Classic hit song material that grows on every listen, sounds like the song was made effortlessly. Pleasant melody and nice chord progression. Smooth band with nice drum groove. The piano reminds me nicely of The Way It Is. Enjoyable familiar vocals and good that you had one of those days to reach that high note Janne
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If it's a phase, it's a good one... keep it up...
Nice sound. Flows well.
Good job on the piano parts. Has a bit of a Bruce Hornsby flavoring... nice!
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Hey David ...
One of these days you might write something that's not great - but I got no money on that remote possibility.
Your creativity and self-perspective shine on this one. If I tried to hit a B4, my larynx would be in ER. Keep up the great work ... we like it!
Alan
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Hi, "The Real" David. Classic Synder. Your singing works fine. You certainly made me wait for that high B! Piano playing it coming along fine as well. Nice write, too.
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Hey thanks James! That means a lot my friend! Thanks so much!
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B(4)!?! Sheesh, I couldn't get there even with shock treatment. I thoroughly enjoy your creative output, David. Excellent vocal style. Fun chord changes and melody, and that piano is sounding really good. One of these days... yeah, great title with so many ways to take it, and your lyrics are terrific. Well done!! Had to listen twice. Damn, tht B(4) is perfect --and strong.
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Thanks Bob! That is very kind!
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Thanks Mario! I really appreciate the listen!
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Excellent tune David. Super vocal and lyric. Loved the chord progressions. Well done
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