Sounds smooth to me!
I would have played with the panning a bit, things are pretty bunched up in the middle. I can hear two rhythm guitars so I'd have put one L and R, maybe 10 o'clock and 2 o'clock.
The track is spoiled by the abrupt cut off at the end! Try and put a slow fade on there - that would suit this kind of genre.
Keep up the good work!

John


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