Nice job, Rob
(Hey I'm a poet and don't know it!)

I liked the way the instruments entered and exited the center stage, much the way bluegrass musicians would handle the song. As Josie said, it really does have an authentic ring to it... lots of us use the bluegrass real tracks to make songs in that genre, but oftentimes they don't work as well as this one did. It left me wondering if you farm for a living. I work with a lot of people who also farm, and the life your song describes is exactly what I hear from them.