Tano, great vocal work! Mix wise sounded good, I would go along with the others on either doing some variation in the music or shorting the lyrics. If you are set on the lyrics i would strongly suggest maybe starting out with one or two instruments and then building up to bring the song to a close. Still a very well done piece, good luck with any future edits. Thanks for sharing!


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