Tano,

Nice song. A lot of good advice has already been dispensed. You have a unique style of arranging. That's a good thing.

You asked for critique, so here goes (free advice, so you get what you pay for! )...

To me the keyboard is slightly out of sync with the other tracks at times. Not saying the patterns need to be perfect, but to my ears they need to be just a little better aligned in places. In my opinion (I'm sure others will disagree) the percussion is just a tad too bright for the mood of the song. I would take it down ever so slightly, and add just a touch of reverb to it (the percussion).

But all in all, these opinions are very nit-picky, and totally subjective.

Again, a very nice song, and nice arrangement. Thanks for sharing!

Steve


Steve Young
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