Hey Floyd,

You've done it again! I long to be able to write songs with your level of "consistently good"! This song is equally excellent as all its predecessors. Like Rog, I found myself humming / singing the chorus long after the song had finished.

My favourite sequence of rhymes were ...

no tears in my eyes, a clever disguise
i can hide how i feel inside

I felt a definite build-up when you sang these. You've got some great inner rhymes sprinkled throughout the lyric, too. The more I listened, the more this song came across as a work you really enjoyed putting together.

Off for another listen now ...

Regards,
Noel


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