Nice job on the song.....

However.... a few nits

The vocals could stand to come up a fair amount in the mix. I found them very hard to hear.

I would be careful with the vocal doubling. If not done right it sounds amateurish and unprofessional. It's possible to do good vocal doubling at home and in smaller studios, but many people simply don't get it right.

Which tracks in it are BB/RB?

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