really nice.

I think the acoustic was the right decision. I didn't hear any others since I've been kinda busy and haven't been here like I would like to be.


Nice work on the lyrics.

I like it



I think the vocals are a bit too loud. I listened on 2 devices, and yeah, I'd back them off a small amount ... just a few db should make them fit the mix better.

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