Sweet sounding guitar.

Some of the notes are kinda left hanging, unresolved. 1:27 is an example. There are others.

I didn't see a guitar BB track indicated so I assume the picking is you playing live. You need to pay attention to the chord changes because it's almost like a key change in some of those places. You need to switch the scale you're working with to accommodate the proper notes to sound "right" and in the proper key. That's the mark of an experienced picker in the jazz world....keep it sounding good all the time.

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You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.