Good write, Rob. I liked the oohs and the shot...

Good vocals. Sounds like Marty Robbins backed by the Statlers...

Nice instrument choices. I thought the panning was wider than it needed to be. The piano sounds hard panned to the left and guitar hard to the right. Pulling those in some would give you a "better bed" for your vocals (but that is simply an opinion...)

The overall sound is perfect for the song...

floyd