No, it definitely sounds very midi-like. Also seems to have too much reverb. Instruments need to be positioned better in the stereo field and given distinct sound space of their own. Voice needs the same reverb to occupy the same space as the band. Otherwise it sounds like you are recording to a track, and not singing with a band. The ending is very awkward too, just cuts off abruptly. I've found that taking these files into a good sequencer and tweaking the ending almost always helps and certainly never hurts. Sometimes a blending of midi (for sustain) with RTs is the key that makes the difference.

I did enjoy the inventive chord progression for this song.

Maybe, as someone who makes their living from this, I am giving you too much information. I'm assuming you want a helpful critique and not just banal kudos, but let me know if I'm overstepping some boundaries here.