Richard,

It's great to see you back in the forum. You've been gone way too long! You certainly haven't lost the knack for vivid imagery.

My favourite lines...

Quote:
She watches ships slip smooth thru the port
Watches gulls soar silken skies
Squeezes my hand as we pause on the board-walk
Turns, looks me in the eye
A question what happens to us when we die?

I found the above highly visual. It's a very strong sequence of lyrics.

All the best for Christmas and beyond,
Noel


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