Originally Posted By: ROG
Hi Lawrence.

Loved the story.

Loved the lyrics.

Loved the song.

Great backing track.

Great vocals.

Great mix.

ROG.
Thank you Rog


Originally Posted By: PeterF
Lawrence

Had me riveted. Liked everything about the song.
Simply great songwriting.

Peter
Thank you Peter.

Originally Posted By: rsdean
Lawrence,

Awesome song! Great vocal and mix as well - loved the story!

Bob
Your very kind Bob

Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Lawrence,

What a cool song! terrific backing tracks and your vocal punctuates the lyric so danged good. This is quite a bit different from most of what we've heard on the forum lately. And what a great diversion from the norm this is. You aced it!

When I lived in San Antonio, I spent a fair amount of time in New Braunfels. Hal Ketchum lives there ... at least he did back in the 80s. We opened for him several times.

Again, great song and your delivery is superb! Best to you,

Alan & Di
Thank you very much. Yes, Hal still does a few gigs around these parts. He has multiple sclerosis and that keeps him home a lot.

Originally Posted By: RnAM
good to have another of your songs Lawrence!

This is so very nice and up-tempo. Perfect drive in it.
I will surely check out that 2678 guitar.

Rob
Thank you Rob. That guitar had such a wonderful groove!

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Nice, Lawrence.

Good write. Good band. Good mix. Cool story!

Always enjoyable to hear you sing.

fj
Thank you Floyd

Originally Posted By: 44kfl
Great write!

nice performance too,

mix sounds very good

my sister lived in New Braunfels for a few years,

used to go there and go tubing down the river,

great summer days.

I enjoyed this a lot as I do with all your songs.

Kenny
Thank you very much Kenny. Yes the tubing is huge around here!

Originally Posted By: David Snyder

A classic!!

Man, I just loved this and tapped my feet the entire time--while I smiled.

Masterful chord progression, singing, lyrics, vibe, everything.

A signature sound from an artist.

"Daniel rolls his own."

!!!!!

Great line!! Jealous!!!

smile
That's very generous David. Thank you very much!

Originally Posted By: F.M.M.
hi Lawrence very cleverly done great peace love the story thanks eric
Thank you Eric.