Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Robert/Scott/Janice...

What a treat to hear! Such an interesting write - I really like the pace of the lyric - terrific images, well painted with a minimum of words...

Scott's guitar work is awesome (both parts).

The background vocals are haunting. The percussion is a cool addition. Excellent mix.

Nice work by all...

fj


Floyd,
I`ve been trying to rein in my wordy tendency lately,so appreciate your comments on the pared down lyrics.
Totally agree on Scott`s guitar; amazingly to me, he fired those tracks back within a day or so of hearing my demo.
Thanks for your thumbs up on our collaboration.

Robert