Richard,

An excellent write. Many good, well thought out lines. Good enough to make one think... a cool thing. One of your best.

Nice use of loops. They suit your song (and your "style") really well. I would have liked to hear a few other sounds added (in then out) along the way for some variation. An arpeggiated snyth maybe (just here and there). Not to take away from what you've done, though... because this is well done...

Enjoyed.

fj