Cliftond,

This is nicely done. If I had any suggestion it would be that, to my ear--and hey, it’s all subjective right?--there could be some more differentiation between the verse and chorus—the harmonies help, but I don’t think go quite far it enough. Maybe some more instrumentation or a subtle shift of melody? Love the instrumental and accentuation guitar licks throughout. And the lyrics are very strong.

I’m just an amateur player and writer, so please take my comments with a big boulder of salt. On the whole, very well done.

All the best,

Deej