Riccled..I sure wish you would post the lyric!!! This was a long, involved story, but I had a hard time following your words...would be a lot easier to capture your sense if I had the lyric to read while I listened. I do have one suggestion..when your u bring the intensity of the arrangement up, it would be great to hear your voice increase with energy also! Give it a try, I think it would add to the overall groove!