I really like the feel of this track. It's got a really nice groove. I also like the quality of your vocals.

Your description of the song as a "tongue in cheek breakup song" got my attention. I love that kind of song, but I have to admit I was a little bit disappointed by the lyrical content. I was expecting something a little more comical I guess. Also I don't quite get what the main hook line " You got me tossing you got me turning every night" has to do with breaking up with someone. Maybe a second verse that goes into more detail of why you are tossing and turning would help clarify that.


Samuel Davis Jr
BIAB 2018 + Cubase + Ignite
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