Josie,

This is beautiful... really, really beautiful. You've taken Donna's excellent words and crafted them into something very special.

I love that oscillation between two chords for the top half of the verse. It adds a wonderful dreamlike and drifting lilt to the song (very much like the way a butterfly zig-zags here and there). I call this inspired arranging.

You found some awesome images for the video!

Congratulations to you and Donna on a terrific collaboration.

All the best to you and Donna,
Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2024