Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
There's enough fine imagery within this tune for at least a couple of videos.

If you're gonna write something as creative as this it certainly helps to have an equally creative band.
And to have the vocal chops to pull it off and, of course, to have a fine guitar picker.

And then you have to put all that together with a creative arrangement and mix.

You scored on all those aspects.

As Blueage aptly said, "spine-tingling atmosphere."

Really cool!


I really appreciate those positive comments,J&B...any videographers wanting to use this as soundtrack for a dystopian epic are most welcome!

Originally Posted By: beatmaster
Sounded like the shadows on the start, I thought it was going to be an instrumental. then the vocals kicked in,

Nice write and arrangement well done guys ,


Scott`s original instrumental is linked at the top.


Originally Posted By: PeterF
Scott & Robert

Amazing stuff! A really interesting composition and one of your best melodies and vocals.
Enjoyed it all. Needed a couple of plays to appreciate the intricacies.

Peter


Thanks very much, Peter!


Originally Posted By: Ember - PG Music
Really great use of Realtracks! Thanks for sharing.


Thanks Ember.

Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Trippy retro style tune!! Love the processing which is quite psychedelic! Always love your poetic and unique lyrics Robert.......and Scott's guitar keeps them great company!! Nice job guys!! Take care. Greg


Greg,
Glad you enjoyed the strangeness here.

Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Excellent writing, as usual! Good vocal too.

Mix wise I thought the vocal could have been louder, especially during the chorus when the guiro comes in.

I like the little instrumental bits from Scott, really worked well.

Cool ending! What is that BTW?

Another good collaboration, nicely done Robert and Scott!



Dave,
Vocal nudged up/Guiro down now.
That`s the pendulum of an old clock at the close.
Thanks for your listen and feedback.


Robert