Dani, each new song brings a stronger, more secure vocal.
The lyrics, melody and arrangement are god good good.
I do think you should reduce the sustain of you end of line notes. The natural vibrato gets more extreme as the note fades. On one fine you held for an eight count which is good but after four the vibrato moved to tremolo and the warble for the last couple.
Nice love song!


Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe