Really good vocal performance, and, as I've said elsewhere, I think it's interesting to see the word-chains that come from a person who is not a primary English speaker--you give us combinations and word choices that probably a native speaker wouldn't even think of--that's creativity!

Would love to see the chord chart for your chorus--lots of interesting changes there!

And that "wandering" solo, and slightly dark terminal chord--like a dissolute person walking wobbly away from you!!