Thanks everyone - you are all ever so kind - too kind :-) The reason I chose to set a Shakespeare sonnet, a section of Romeo and Juliet, to music is simply this: I just think that the words are sublime and I have struggled to find a better "chat up line", a better encapsulating of love at first sight in words anywhere else - that's all. It's simply divine for me, so ... that said, my setting of it deserves polishing - so, first chance I get, I will go back to this for sure and see what I can do to make it flow a little better! I am so grateful that you all took time to help me with this little effort of mine - THANK YOU. I will do my best to do better justice to good old William ;-) Have a wonderful weekend, everyone, and please stay well and safe.

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